Fakes

I welcome challengers of my view

Some people love lies

They live by cheating others

World is ruled by fakes

Reviews

[Dhaye]

Witty senryu.

This world is ruled by fakes...

I agree with the other reviewer here, that we're all fakes, even when we are trying to not be.

Lie/Cheating is a sin. Sometimes, we do it to ourselves unconsciously...by believing in false hopes. Even to ourselves we become fakes.

[zainul]

Thank you very much,Dhaye.
I don't have enough words to reply your well crafted review.
I just congratulate you and appeal to you for trying to hate lies.

[Dhaye]

Actually, I have mentioned that I hate lie in a line of this poem of mine...

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/hearmymind96/1172996/

[zainul]

Thanks for the write and sharing about the piece.
I am going there to read it now.
Best luck!

[Rita L. Sev]

Some people love lies...

I have known these people - and I never understand them. Lies are poison... We do well to arm ourselves with truth, and avoid the fakes whenever possible. Powerful short piece here, Zainul.

[zainul]

Rita,I am very inspired by your wonderful review.
I am very happy to learn that you do well to arm yourselves with truth, and avoid the fakes whenever possible.
Your strong feeling against lies will inspire others to follow truth.
Thanks for the great contribution,dear friend.:)

[Cassie]

This is so awfully true, good one Zainul

[zainul]

Thank you Cassie for stopping by to grace this piece.
This means a lot to me.

[Prritiy]

Yes we do find some fake people in our life who hurt us and teach us lessons too.

a good write.

[♥ Kinnixk]

I know a few people like this. You have a nice writing style :)

[zainul]

I am extremely sorry,dear friend for leaving your lovely comment without replying so long.
I am very happy to note that you know a few people like this.
Thanks for your compliments regarding my writing style.

[♥ Kinnixk]

You're welcome and it's fine (:

[zainul]

I feel relaxed now.
The burden of love that comes with the review is quite heavy.
I can't feel easy unless I reply back.
Thanks for stopping by again.:)

[Thallygal]

This is true. Yet for me is important to see past the lies and what is beneath that makes people feel they have to wear masks and be fake
Nice haiku

[zainul]

I am extremely sorry,Thallygal for missing your lovely comment so long.
Thanks for the admiring review that inspires me immensely.

[Eric Cox]

There are definitely too many people like this. Nicely worded write.

[zainul]

Thanks, Eric for the admiring review.
Stay in touch.
Great points are coming to enlighten us.

[Eric Cox]

you're welcome. :)

[dukovan]

I believed from a power/rank standpoint it is. I feel like the world is ruled by popular opinion and ideals. Many of which resonate into each and everyone of us if we do not choose to become aware so in turn...we're all fakes, often even when we are trying to not be.

[zainul]

Thanks for the great review.
I adore your point of view.
I love your wonderful comment,"we're all fakes, often even when we are trying to not be".

[StillUnwritten]

Oh how true this is! I couldn't agree more. You have a very nice writing style.

[zainul]

I feel very happy to read your inspiring review.
Thanks also for the compliments.

[StillUnwritten]

You're welcome.

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so true, nicely said

[zainul]

I am very glad to read your lovely review.
Thanks for the encouragement.