Jasmine

Jasmine smiles with joy

When I enter the garden

Fragrance wins my heart

Reviews

[Stella Armour]

beautiful haiku Zainul, i can almost smell the sweet fragrance of Jasmine ..

[zainul]

Thank you Stella for such passionate review :)
You have a great heart to appreciate things.

[Stella Armour]

i love short form poetry Zainul...and this is lovely

[zainul]

This is my pleasure,dear friend :)

[Sami Khalil]

Saved in the library Zainul. You are the ever talented...:)

[zainul]

You are so generous,dear poet with amazing wisdom.
I feel very great that you stopped by and presented the wonderful review :)

[Sami Khalil]

The feelings are mutual. My pleasure dear friend....:)

[zainul]

That's right.All love must be mutual.
My pleasure too.:)

[Sami Khalil]

Even the emoticons Zainul ( inside joke between me and you )
^^~^^ :)

[zainul]

I secretly long for this final dessert!
(Let it be a secret deal)
^^~^^ :)

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...Lol

[Rogue]

-sigh-

I need an address for this garden. I'll just plug it into GPS and be right over!

This was lovely. There is something so warm in your writes be they a few lines or many. :)

[zainul]

Rogue,you have glorified this piece and me with your passionate words and sense of modern technology.
Please plug it into GPS and be right over there.
But,would you mind to glance at a garden close to home to see what happens there?
I am very glad that you stopped by and trigger a can of fragrance in my room
through the magic of your words :)

[Rogue]

That was very kind of you. Thank you, Zainul. Always a pleasure to read here. :)

[zainul]

I am very happy to know that the place is a pleasure for you :)
Thanks for the compliments.

[Prritiy]

wow loved this piece :)

[zainul]

I am very glad that you loved it :)
I am sure you also feel similarly when you enter your garden of passion!
Thanks for stopping by,Prritiy :)

[Prritiy]

:) yes i just keep gazing at flowers, butterflies, bees n at times dragon fly that too of my fav color -red :)

[zainul]

I am surprised to know that your favorite dragonfly is red.
Mine too is red.
What a wonderful coincidence!
Gazing at flowers, butterflies, bees and dragon fly gives divine pleasure.
Thanks for sharing your passion :)

[Prritiy]

they say birds of feather flock together :)

[zainul]

:)

[Prritiy]

:)

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I love this verses, makes me feel the peace of the universe...so deep and clear in the same time!

[zainul]

Thank you for your lovely review.
Your compliments and support help me to be a poet bit by bit.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

yes, everyone needs support, but most important to believe in yourself! and you are a great poet!

[zainul]

You are sooooooooooooooooooo nice,Nina.

[zainul]

Thanks for the wonderful review.
I am impressed by your novel explanation.

[buckeyebren]

It is clear your heart was won long before entering the garden, as was hers. The point was made quite clearly. Wonderful work.

[zainul]

I don't know how to apologize properly for the long delay in response.
Sorry for missing your amazing comment.
I adore your admiring review.
This means a world to me.
Thanks for stopping by to grace this piece.

[sienikeha]

love!

[zainul]

Very nice of you.

[Androglossia]

You amazingly created a three lined English haiku that appears to follow the three phrases of Japanese haiku. The poem appears too short but it painted an entire world of wonders. Great work and great use of juxtaposition.

[zainul]

Maryanne,thanks for your lovely review.
I also enjoy your compliments.
Best wishes,
read moreMaryanne,thanks for your lovely review.
I also enjoy your compliments.
Best wishes,
Zainul

[Androglossia]

You're very welcome!

[zainul]

Love your poems.
Writing reviews on them.
Have a good time.

[Androglossia]

Thank you very much! My poems can be very abstract. I hope you can relate.

[Helen Crutchett]

A very delicate and beautiful haiku, in fact it was outstanding! Well done!

[zainul]

I am very honored by your wonderful review accompanied by nice compliments.
Thank you so much.