Perfume

Rickshaw moves fast

As the strong man gives thrust

Sweat emits perfume

Reviews

[Prritiy]

nicely written....
the smell of hard work smells nice

[zainul]

I appreciate you for the great observation.
In fact,the working people like rickshaw-pullers work hard for their mere survival.
Their sense of dignity of labor and honesty immensely inspire me.

[Prritiy]

:)

[zainul]

:)

[s y e]

I loved it. It's very good! Well done
Your poems are very good

[zainul]

Thank you Sye, for the admiring review and amazing compliments.

[Blue Ivory]

I love rickshaws! Good thing you're bringing our culture to this site :D

[zainul]

Anika,some thing went wrong.So,I missed your wonderful comment.
However,better late than never.
Adore your passion for our culture.
Have a nice time,dear poet.

[Zainab UF]

I've always envied that rare ability to convey so much through so little. "Sweat emits perfume" must be one of the most poignant lines I've read in my life.

This is a really wonderful work; thanks for sharing it!

[zainul]

Thank you Zainab for your lovely review.
The man piloting the rickshaw will be happy to learn about this poem.
But,is it possible for him in his lifetime?
I wanted to express my respect for the man who toils hard to reach many persons to their destinations by his carriage.
You are quite familiar with the Indian situation

[Sugar Plum ♥]

so nice and original idea!

[zainul]

I am grateful to you Nina.
Your compliments strengthens me.

[Jade-UH]

It's beautiful. I really enjoyed reading it.

[zainul]

Jade,beauty of the learned members of this site inspired me to write this piece.
Thanks for your kind review.

[Serenity Faith]

There are so many different stories that could be told through these few words. Excellent write my friend.

[zainul]

Thank you Emily for the nice words.
Your inspiring words will help me improve my work.

[Poetic Beauty]

Interesting

[zainul]

Thanks a lot.

[Renée]

A lot of story in few words! Well Done !

[zainul]

Thanks Renee for the nice review.

[Muse]

Evocative and amusing. You tell so much...with so little.

Muse

[zainul]

Thank you Muse for your lovely review and great compliments.
Your encouragement is world to me.