Okay, definitely not one of my best. I'm amazed I could write this at all, what with my creativity being lethargic lately. And of course, my general laziness. I'd be honoured if you review this, though!
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Well, first of all, be more kind to yourself! Ha.
I think you wrote a fine poem here. People who understand photography will get more out of it htan others, but it is relatable.
We are all either growing up or resisting it. It is a constant force, like gravity. also, it is proof that there is a "force" in this universe that is pouring energy in...
Nothing is ever really lost; only out of range for a time.
Thinking on that for now.
Be well.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Your review provided some food for thought... well, a lot, actually. Thank you so much!
Well, first of all, be more kind to yourself! Ha.
I think you wrote a fine poem here. People who understand photography will get more out of it htan others, but it is relatable.
We are all either growing up or resisting it. It is a constant force, like gravity. also, it is proof that there is a "force" in this universe that is pouring energy in...
Nothing is ever really lost; only out of range for a time.
Thinking on that for now.
Be well.
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Your review provided some food for thought... well, a lot, actually. Thank you so much!
I love writing, I honestly do. But if I had a school assignment to write about myself, it would definitely be the one with a big red F on it.
I'm Zainab, a fifteen-year-old girl with a love for go.. more..