Note: Silver Hills is the name of my new school, so I thought it would be a nice play on words to use the metal and its uses in reality and fiction as parallels.
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Aww, I definitely think bullying and teasing should be put to a halt too! It's pointless and quite stupid to me! My parents always tells me that the reason people do that is because they're jealous of something you have that they don't. Please listen to that piece of advice, because that's true. :) Keep your head lifted high and the thing that just kills bullies is when you shine your biggest smile even when they throw negativity at you! Try it, it's so fun :D Anyway, this poem's depressing but also a fact of life. Great job, keep up the good work. :)
Ashley Rivers-- your friend ;)
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
Thank you, Ashley, both for the review and the advice! I'll keep it in mind. :)
12 Years Ago
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I think this is wonderful. Your author's note adds some backstory, but the poem stands just from your intro. I even think it would without it. Your strength comes through in your writing. And, for what it is worth, I am proud of you. You are very talented.
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
Thank you so, so much for the kind words of encouragement!
I love writing, I honestly do. But if I had a school assignment to write about myself, it would definitely be the one with a big red F on it.
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