Bee, are, and I

When she drove off my head started putting these words together.

Why do your tears flow?
Him, me, or your hormones?
I feel I need to know
So that I can make you whole.

This pain I'll persevere
For 18 more long years. 
Knowing it's him you want,
And me that you will haunt.

I ask you, "Bleed me dry?"
Still we're on a water ride.
And when it's said and done
You'll be my only one.

Dear, God, I beg, you, "Please,
Just bring her back to me,
Or, to the devil I will go
with my hollow empty soul."

If I could live forever
In the dreams I have of you
I would wrap you in my arms,
I would fly you to the moon.

There we'd be alone,
Laying on the worlds night light,
You, happy as ever with
Our children by our side.

In the sunlit sky
I would tell you, soft and slow,
"You're the reason we can breathe,
So; please, don't ever go."

The night won't last forever.
Soon the stars will start to flee,
And an empty bed I'll wake to
My sweetheart far from me.

She's crying in her pillow
Wishing that she'd wake up dead,
because I stole her lifestyle from her
and replaced it with a kid.

A high school drop out father
and a mother with two kids
can't seem to make it work
in the world that we live in.

I would take you away.
Any second. Any day.
And make you're life worth living
If only you would stay.

Author's Note

I hope this story can bring someone entertainment.

Reviews

[char]

Nice. Capture reality of love. Not so pretty, is it?

[Z.A. Cox]

Sometimes it is, sometimes it isn't. In this case it was and then it wasn't.

[saratogaparty]

Wow, this is amazing!

[Z.A. Cox]

Thank you!

[Jack...]

Deep and dark, endings...who needs them. very well done.

[Z.A. Cox]

Thank you!

[s y e]

Nicely written, very emotional, good job

[Z.A. Cox]

Thank you! I try to be very real and emotional and I hope that shows.

[Z.A. Cox]

The sentence "When she drove off my head started putting these words together" from the top is very true. I wrote this poem this morning after a friend of mine left my place. As soon as she drove off i sat down wrote it and posted it.

[s y e]

It's very good, and moving

[T. Val]

A love story gone wrong perhaps. Well done. I enjoyed this.

[Z.A. Cox]

Exactly! I'm glad you enjoyed it.