Mold for Company

Mold for Company

A Poem by Zack Valenta

Opaque green glow on my fly infested home
A foundation of hoarded scraps of metal and wire
Circuit boards hooked through Styrofoam
and used napkins

Bzzzzzzzzz goes the fluorescent tilt
of cased steel and bulb
The voices of a crashed signal - a crashed station
Pumping heavily through through a raccoon's skull

Swarmed, unidentified invaders
Taking aim at acid-drenched papers

Poison vapors, escaping through tarps
Above on a formation of pink insulation
Are wicked, junkyard angels
Playing their harps

© 2014 Zack Valenta


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You viewed the things minute and molded in a poetic form good, how come you think so abstract and still make it to a nice blend? Very imaginative...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wasn't really crazy about this one, in fact I think it really sucks. You used through twice back to back in the same sentence and in general I'm left wondering what de-ranged mind has written such useless garbage. Dude, my recommendation? You gotta trash this shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Poem.

OK OK OK....

I liked it.
Are you experimenting with mold?
A lot.


Posted 10 Years Ago


Zack Valenta

10 Years Ago

I am ignorant to this jealousy! xD
Matching Socks

10 Years Ago

As if.........
I think this is genius. Great write, I especially enjoyed the ending, very imaginative.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zack Valenta

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
The choice to see beauty in things is surprisingly a hard choice. Your poem addresses that well, especially with an ending that really seals it. This is a great read and the ending is absolutely perfect and drives home the points you are addressing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 25, 2014
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"To be afraid, unsettled, and debilitated by the placement and use of certain words, always has me invigorated and wanting more. I do love the wickedly dark, the wickedly surreal. The ambiguity is dis.. more..

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