The SaintA Story by DeusExMachinaThis one isn't my favourite. Don't know why. See what you think of it, you may disagree!THE SAINT A Tale by Zach S. Rumfitt
THE Saint was
entombed after her death. They carried her, through the halls of the Fortress,
to the centre and into the great grey block that marked her place. They carved
a statue, and set it standing over the body. It was created from pure gold. It had been a glorious end to such a noble life, upon the battlefields of
Ronn vanquishing the Kellermen of the west. It was said that at the moment of
her death every loyal woman burst into tears, and that the sky turned red with
sorrow.
That’s what the audio-guide says to me, its silky female voice explaining
in overlong and boring detail about the western Kellermen and the battle of
Ronn. We shouldn’t be spending today like this, in a gloomy old castle. It is
my birthday, after all. Dad and Jo have moved on, off into more grey stone rooms haunted by
non-existent ghosts. Someone moves up next to me, and they make some remark
about this stupid Saint woman. I can’t hear them over the audio-guide. Pulling
the headphones off my head, I apologise for the fact I didn’t hear her. I see
her face. She’s pretty fit, with nice blonde hair and dark eyes. Good body,
too. ‘That’s alright’, she says in a voice without any kind of accent I can
think of, ‘It was just a silly little remark. What’s your name?’ For a brief
moment I struggle to think, then blurt it out like some twit. ‘ ‘Weird, isn’t it, this Saint thing?’ ‘Don’t particularly know. I mean, she can’t have been a Saint, can she?
That’s just religious stuff. Not real. Myths.’ The girl smiles at me. ‘Yeah, probably. Weird though. My dad, like,
lectures me on this stuff. He’s a history buff, you know? Says we need to learn
how people in the past lived.’ We stand a moment in silence, hearing children far off. ‘You never said your name.’ I say. I sound stupid there, like a little
kid. ‘It’s July.’ A cold spider runs down my back. ‘Isn’t July the name of that Saint?’ I struggle to hide a niggle of fear.
Ghosts don’t exist. Just a weird
coincidence. ‘Yeah. My dad named me after her.’ The shiver of fear in me dissipates
mostly, sitting back and waiting for more. ‘That’s how much of a history geek
he is. He named me after some long-dead girl who he never even met. When’d she
die?’ ‘Tenth century’ I say, before adding: ’I think.’ Don’t want to sound like
a git again, It’s been so long,
They called her the Archangel of England, a piece of heaven on earth.
Every day, at her tomb, mourners would wait for her resurrection. They hoped
with all their hearts that she would return to save them. But she did not, and
the people of the fortress fell to another attack by the western Kellermen. For
some reason the two tribes had always been enemies, like it was written in
there blood. The Fortress was ransacked, and the great king Herephude was slain.
Before the sword separated his head from his body, cried for Saint July to save
him. The
‘Why did they call her ‘I dunno. I think they just thought she was heavenly.’ I get a sudden
urge to say something that I will regret. I stop myself from speaking, from
saying ‘so are you’. I don’t even know this girl. I never even had a girlfriend, not like that. This would be impossible on
so many levels. She looks at her watch, then says a quick good bye. I want to
ask her why she has to go, like everyone does, like my parents and my sister
always do. Everyone leaves in the end. She hurries off, out of the room and away to her family, and their love.
She probably has a boyfriend. I get a sudden stab of jealousy. There was a fire at the old Fortress on the hill in 2004. Damage was
minimal, but a young boy, who was visiting, was killed. His name was I am dead. I see the bunch of flowers that my family leaves behind in this room,
where I died. They have no idea. Something stirs behind me, and I turn. She’s here again. I look for
somewhere to hide, but you cannot hide from her. ‘ ‘Please, you need company. We are both dead.’ ‘No!’ I scream, and run from the room. She knows I cannot go far, for I
am anchored to the tomb of The Saint. That’s the place that I died.
The Saint wipes her eyes and walks back to her shadows. The poor boy
fears her, and she just wants to be motherly. Thousands of years takes its toll
on someone. She’d been there when the poor child died. She’d tried to pull him from
the flames, but she was too late. The fires had burned his little body to a
crisp. Saint July, Archangel of England, goes back to her tomb to wait for
another year. © 2012 DeusExMachinaAuthor's Note
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StatsAuthorDeusExMachinaNowhere! (It's in England).AboutI write, I talk to people, I moan, I write, I listen to music, I write... etc. more..Writing
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