We, the Painters...

when does ones hope transform reality..

I crave the feeling of a revolution.
 

I want to be an artist.

I wish i had the power to imagine something inside my head and put it down on paper

....with pastels.

I would paint independent figures each glorious in there own way. Yet all intangled in
a vine that equates all. woven through and through with great passion. It would all go together in a perfect order. shaded in perfect fashion......

with a sequence of perfect colors.

 

 

 

 

I would paint about a young boy who desires the things that frieghten him most,

but, a boy who, ordinary to the naked eye, holds incredible significance.

 

this is you,

 

 

 

and you,

 

 

and me...........

 

this painting would bring out a dream in him, and all would see it.

Those who choose to see will be transformed heart and soul in a crave for a brilliant world.

it would bring out such beauty that they start seeing the unique, uncany beauty in everyone they see.

They would call it a masterpeice for it would bring out a hope that they all hold inside.

Reviews

[...MysteryGirl...]

Lov ethis piece!
It is very unique and put a picture in my head!
Keep Writing!!!

[Pookie]

Very creative and long. I loved it. It put a good picture in my head as you put your thoughts down. keep it up.

[Ophelia]

This is very deep, and I loved reading it. It has so much depth in but a few words. With every different colour, comes a different perception of each word. This is definately a piece that leaves the reader thinking, contemplating, and seeking out EVERY meaning of the poem. I like how you put the words together. They flowed like a stream. Like... a stream of thought. Anyhoo, I'm rambling. I think this is great!

[lost inside]

This is a beautiful write
and so well said. I like your colors of the poem.
Very well created.

[Emotional Orphan]

Nice style and excellent content. The rhythm works, and quite frankly it is believable !!!

Nice Work.

[CommonHeartCure]

Oh!It's absolutely brilliant!Unique!And Imaginative!Please keep up the great work!

[Thinker1]

Wow. This was great. I loved how you used color to highlight the important words. This was a lovly poem, well writen, and it flowed well. It has everything that a good poem needs, and I really enjoyed it. Good job!

[Tears Forgotten]

very good, I love how you form it out to describe more and more... nice unique style... amazing...

[Butterflymom]

This is incredible, beautiful, original, and well done. The yellow doesn't show up and is hard to read other than that it is an awesome piece. I really enjoyed the tone of it as well as the sentiment. Well done!