The Holy Land

God's greatest gift

The holy land isn't in the sand

It's in the wetland to the South

where men enter but don't understand.

There is truly few who can.

But it's better to maintain

and remain sane.

than to understand this often forbidden, most traveled land.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think it means

Reviews

[costa siwale]

Is it something that belongs to a woman..i am kind of a bustard for thinking like this right? I love the poem though, simply witty

[Zach Knox]

Naw you aren't that is exactly what it is the holyland

[costa siwale]

Unfortunately I don't know any one who's remained sane after visiting that holy land..you're cheeky with words, like that

[Brandon]

One who listens and speaks truth from the heart. Splendid read and write, sir Zach. Namaste.

[Zach Knox]

Thanks I appreciate your kind.words

[Sami Khalil]

I think you have described it marvelously...Pen on...:)

[Zach Knox]

Thank you sir

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)