Hells journey issue 1

Prologue
Time lurks with everlasting madness that leaks from the crevasses of are universe. Through this sin appears and what is sin it is a piece of what makes a human human. It is never a good idea to become one with a sin when someone is taken in by sin madness occurs now you maybe asking why does it matter I am not a heavy sinner I may drink a little or spend a little to much money but I am not bad. Well to you I say congratulations your where many people began when they let there sin take over. When a sin takes over and you die where do you think you go to hell well I guess you can call it that but in truth if you let sin rule you and conquer you then when you die you will be sent to a place of terrifying tragedies. This place will make you feel pain that you thought only existed in your wildest dreams make you cry a actually river when you feel the guilt. But most of all you'll feel fear oh yes you will be terrified and I am here as your guide my name is Zorastar I am the storyteller and guide through theses wicked tales. So without further or due let's take a look at this man's hell his name is Michael Hort.
Michael Hort
The man awoke with a jolt his eyes heavy with sleep he was laying curled in a ball in a small twin sized bed. The room was dark eerily dark with no light to be seen he could not see and when he tried to move he felt his body lay stiff as a board. He couldn't move and he then tried to yell out nothing came out a soundless scream that none could hear. He lay there panicking to himself when soundly he heard breathing it was quiet but heavy he tried to move his head to find where the breathing was coming from but his head was frozen in place the breathing suddenly stopped and instead he heard a low laugh like that of a crazed man and then silence. He then felt movement return to his body slowly starting with his head. As he regained movement of his head he felt an urge either curiosity or blind courge to turn his head towards the breathing but as he did there was nothing there but the breathing started up again this time it was closer and in his ear. This time he did not dare turn his head for fear who ever it was would kill him if he did. Suddenly movement returned to his arms and his fist flew up to hit the person in the face but his fist only met air. Then the heavy breathing turned into a laugh the who ever it was had somehow traveled from the bed to the door but how there was only a second he thought as he lay there starting to sweat from fear. Then finally he felt movement came back to his legs and started to get up when a pain filled his legs. As he looked down he saw the blankets where his legs had been were now soaked in blood and his legs were gone. He then heard a loud crunch in his ear as blood dripped onto his face and he turned this time and saw a heavy set face over his it's skin blue as if it had never seen the sun it's we're hollow except from black orbs covered in red veins. It's mouth was wide and full of flat teeth like molars that lined the mouth. In it's mouth in saw the last of his own pinky toe slide down it's grotesque throat. As he began to scream the man grabbed his tongue and pulled out a long knife and removed his tongue from his mouth so all that came from his own scream was bubbling of blood. For some reason though he did not feel like he was dying but still feeling the pain flowing throughout his body the man then put his tongue in it's mouth and he watched as it slowly slid down its throat. Then as the man began to laugh it looked into his eyes and the veins flashed a bright red. He suddenly was taken to a small room where a woman lay on the floor her head bleeding and her mouth open in a silent scream as he felt himself pull a gun from his pocket and c**k it then pointed it at the woman yelling “ if I can't have you now one can b***h.” He then pulled the trigger once twice three times before turning it onto himself and pulling the trigger ending his own life. Suddenly he was back in the room with the creature who was now knowing at his torso it then stood up tall and said in a unnerving voice like a radio with bad reception “ you have sinned you were obsessed with the woman and filled with gluttony you took her from this world now you will relieve this for ten thousand years and will forget every time so every day you will feel the same dread the same fear and I will feed upon your flesh welcome to your hell.” The man laughed a joyous laugh as the man choked on more blood while the monster continued to feast.
Zorastars notes
Well it seems that this tale was short but so goes it his sin was that of gluttony he wanted his wife so bad he wanted all of her to himself. That actually is two sins which is greed and gluttony so why did the creature chose greed as his man sin. Well the man had murdered his wife after a drinking session. This is interesting but so goes it here in hell tell next time this has been Zorastar

Author's Note

This is my first story in a long time so it's not the best but I hope to get better feed back would be appreciated constructive please.