Stoner's of the tree's

So here i am, ive come to be

In the murky green of some random tree

across the branch of blackthorn tree

Is gerrard mullins licking his knees

 

As this is getting wierd, i begin to flee

From the strange and scary random tree

As I try to hitch-hike, down the misty lane

I hear an eery creaking and sobs of pain

 

A lonley cyclist peddles alone

Tears fill his goggles as he cycles home

She was gone but a minute, but she'd left the tree

Onto the trike of his rival PRICK-FACED WANKER McGee

 

Ive now lost myself in this foggy abyss

Gerry's upside down and is taking a piss

My bong's been misplaced, and I cannot see

This is the last time I ever get stoned in a tree

 

 

Reviews

[Jimmy Toots]

Nice one, very interesting to say the least, and your word choice was impeccable, very expressive and real!

[princesspoet]

you dont have kids around 14 do you? would you want them finding this on the net with prick and piss?

[princesspoet]

prick and piss is not really necessary, what sort of viewers do you want? those who would spend 30 dollars on a book of your poems, or 15?

try to aim for a higher class...other then that i enjoyed it..

if you are aiming for teeny viewers, highschool beer guzzlers those are words to use in writings..although i suggest not to either...young people in this forum..