Last Call

Last Call



I wish I had a key to your heart
I wish this shark mastered the art
of tearing you apart
I'd take a bite out of your soul
and swallow the damage whole
you do this to me
I'm crying on my knees
screaming "leave me be"
my girl I love you
I love the ice in your eyes
the fire in your thighs
burning were demons lye
were angels come to die
I'm bound to take a wife
you're bound to take my life
the harmony in strife
I'll suffer one last moment of bliss
so sharpen your knife
and blow me a kiss


--Z.Silas Herrera

Reviews

[Anata]

I�ll suffer one last moment of bliss
so sharpen your knife
and blow me a kiss

wow. Really wow.
You describe how devastating desire and love can be, and you paint the perfect picture of not being able to part with that devastating side.
Very nice imagery here, and i really like the flow.

[Brianna Brie]

I wish I had a key to your heart
I wish this shark mastered the art
of tearing you apart
I'd take a bite out of your soul
and swallow the damage whole

Real, emotional, the wanting of revenge...raw! Great poem.

[Charles Booher]

this is so deep and emotionally moving. i LOVED it. i'm a sucker for well-writen romancic poems, and this definately fit the bill! GOOOOD JOBBB

[Celtic Cat]

Excellent. What a great flow to this, love the balance in this piece.
the harmony in strife... awesome!!

[Alex]

I wish this shark mastered the art
of tearing you apart
I�d take a bite out of your soul
and swallow the damage whole

Oh I absolutely LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE this piece especially this part

[Darla1]

Very well written.....your words flowed.