the last days

the last days

I bite the rope and stair
Tap the needle and inject the nightmare
I see the Devil everywhere
Is God even out there
No home no rest no peace
No food no hope no release
war within us war in the Middle East
I sleep with dollar bills and the beast
the world is filled with loathing and erosion
extortion and corrosion
pain and fear from emotions
peace and joy no more
I love weak women I love w****s
I love weak men I love war
I love the truth but I love when you ignore
a broken nation is all I ask for
solid devastation is harder
glorification of an anti-martyr
push the button damnation starter
I drop bombs like bird s**t
politicians i know you heard it
I'll take your crucifix and invert it

--Z.Silas Herrera

Reviews

[Chris Zahar]

Again, a perfectly violent piece of literature told with a nice rhyme and rhythm. "I love weak women I love w****s/ I love weak men I love w***e". Besides that fact that it might benefit from a comma there, or some other punctuation that will force the reader to break, I can't find anything else wrong with this poem. Your words are so powerful, so devastating, so in your face that I swear this poem would break my nose if it got too close.

[Zelligg]

Wow! I didn't know Satan could write! This work is so well-integrated and smooth despite the rat-a-tat-tat as familiar targets are hit, one by one.

[Celtic Cat]

I enjoyed the beginning.... but then you went a little out there for me. I think I'd like it better if it went in less directions... though thoughts seldom railroad, unless we're obsessing..
But, it was an interesting read nonetheless. Thanks for sharing!

[Chelsea L. Ellsworth]

very lovely. loved the whole thing. it's 1 AM in the mourning, i'll wirte a better review latter, ok?

[J. Walker]

I like this poem alot. It's easy to rap too. All there'd have to be is a beat and a hook then there's a track right there, lol.

[Anata]

I drop bombs like bird s**t
politicians i know you heard it
I�ll take your crucifix and invert it

Wow this is a very powerful write!
You have mixed so many emotions in this one, and it's really intriging to read.
really amazing write!

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Really good read this one.. I especially liked the begining.. the poem as a whole reminds me of rage against the machine style lyrics...