what if I'm not..!

what if I'm not..!

A Poem by zZeal
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A girl in darkness . .

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What if I'm not..!
The life so lonely, you find it mysterious..
The conversations so long and false..you find them thoughtful,
The life so low..and you ask for a hand,
You see yourself in me and I'm not a mirror I know..
You want my dreams but I'm shallow I know..
The nights are darker and my visits to the mornings of dreams are seldom..
I don't want you to be me..never!
I just want to walk a few miles with you..a walk of relief..charming smiles..
And then let you set your self free of my love..
And to let you go back to the sunshine..!
..not all moons are beautiful !
_Surabhi #zeal

© 2014 zZeal


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I love this poem, and it may be a little ironic to say I relate to it very well. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zZeal

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
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"You see yourself in me and I'm not a mirror I know." That is an awesome line, really good. My pleasure reading this, keep writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zZeal

9 Years Ago

Thank you:)
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