Self-destruct

Because you’re so in love that you act insane

Thinking with your heart, but not your brain

You don’t know how to stop this pain

 

Rain starts to fall and you run for the door

You can’t stand to stay inside anymore

Because she was here, she walked this floor

 

You try, but you can’t get her out of your head

Memories of the night that she was in your bed

The warmth, the kisses, the words that were said

 

Now she cuts you out of the photos she crops

Doesn’t care if your face‘s stained with teardrops

She’s gone and you can feel it as your heart stops

Reviews

[NinjaPi]

This is extrordinary. Its full of feeling but very clean. I especially enjoyed the second stanza.

[hopelessromantic]

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

[Sweet Emotions]

I like the rhyme scheme. The subject is painful, but it's a very realistic poem.

[Tasha]

The rhyming worked well, it was sad but you did a great job.
♥ Ta'Shandra