What Are You?

Have you no hope, no faith, no fear

Don't you hold close

To any one thing you find dear

 

Have you no mind, spirit, or soul

Can you imagine

A day when you will lose control

 

Have you no will, no drive to live

When all I see

Is that you have so much to give

 

Now I know, I hear, I see

Of all the people

I need you to set me free

Reviews

[Chloe]

You put so much raw emotion into this that I had to read it over again to make sure I got the message clearly. You are a wonderful writer and I hope that whatever pain you feel, will be healed by your future happiness.

[Cynthia]

There's a sad tone in this poem, but I actually love it. The last stanza is great, but I also love the first stanza on the feelings, I love the rhymes really much, makes the flow really great and nice, smooth.
Nice written!

[Jess Holden]

This sounds so sad!! I love sad poems!! :) I love the rhymes, I can never get stanzas with three lines to rhyme :/ you have talent!!!