relef

I finelly got relef from some of the stress ive been going through

the constent bricking has stopped

I no longer have to deal with some of the childish things I had to deal with

im thankful to have friends that care and worry about me

who even would hurt someone if the need come

they are my family I love every last one of my friends no matter how far or close they may be

or wether they are boy or girl

I love all my friends and stick by their sides no matter what

there are days when im down and all my friends bring me right back up

and days when I do stupid stuff and they get mad at me

but no matter what I know they will always love me for me and not for

what I can give them and this is why I love all my friends

and will never let them go or let a tear roll down their cheecks

I will find the person who did this and give them a peace of my mind

NEVER MESS WITH MY FRINDS!

my friends are the reson I live and have reson to live so don't try to do any thing to them

Reviews

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

I love the shape of this.
You convey your love of friendship very well here.
Friends are important in life and friendship is to be valued and cherished always.
However, I would remove the underlines here, or use it a little less throughout.
**(Check your spelling before posting your work)
Keep writing! :)

[yvo miki]

thanks I will take it off

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Just a suggestion. I think it would read better. :)

[yvo miki]

alright I understand

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

:) Take a look at your overall structure as you finish a piece of writing.

[yvo miki]

alright I will

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

The last step is reading out loud and making sure you have the pauses and the wording correct. Sometimes, I miss them or leave out a word and this catches those mistakes.

[yvo miki]

Alright I'll make sure to do that

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Touching:) really nice of you:) i'm always here if you need someone to talk to. 100 points from me.

[yvo miki]

awww thanks a lot and I glad u are

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You are welcome:)

[yvo miki]

guys rate this please !!!!!!!!

[yvo miki]

Thanks

[Luna Chan]

trust me, they do, they'll pay!! this is beautiful. we will always be here for u. u have my number.

[yvo miki]

aww thanks so much

[Luna Chan]

I love u and ill always be here to defend u

[yvo miki]

I know u do and I love u too

[One Lost Anti-Hero]

Happy to see your feeling better.

[yvo miki]

wellllllll kinda