relef

I finelly got relef from some of the stress ive been going through

the constent bricking has stopped

I no longer have to deal with some of the childish things I had to deal with

im thankful to have friends that care and worry about me

who even would hurt someone if the need come

they are my family I love every last one of my friends no matter how far or close they may be

or wether they are boy or girl

I love all my friends and stick by their sides no matter what

there are days when im down and all my friends bring me right back up

and days when I do stupid stuff and they get mad at me

but no matter what I know they will always love me for me and not for

what I can give them and this is why I love all my friends

and will never let them go or let a tear roll down their cheecks

I will find the person who did this and give them a peace of my mind

NEVER MESS WITH MY FRINDS!

my friends are the reson I live and have reson to live so don't try to do any thing to them

Reviews

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

I love the shape of this.
You convey your love of friendship very well here.
Friends are important in life and friendship is to be valued and cherished always.
However, I would remove the underlines here, or use it a little less throughout.
**(Check your spelling before posting your work)
Keep writing! :)

[yvo miki]

thanks I will take it off

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Just a suggestion. I think it would read better. :)

[yvo miki]

alright I understand

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

:) Take a look at your overall structure as you finish a piece of writing.

[yvo miki]

alright I will

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

The last step is reading out loud and making sure you have the pauses and the wording correct. Sometimes, I miss them or leave out a word and this catches those mistakes.

[yvo miki]

Alright I'll make sure to do that

[Rajat malik]

You got it right, friendship is really the best bond in this world ever formed by someone :) I loved the way you depict the reality

[yvo miki]

well thanks lol

[Rajat malik]

Always welcome :):):):):)

[yvo miki]

ur sweet :):):):):P

[Rajat malik]

I know....hahaha.......
though thanks

[yvo miki]

lol that's good that u know

[Rajat malik]

I hope so....You are too humorous

[yvo miki]

really ?I didn't notice (sarcasm )

[Rajat malik]

that's why I told you.....

[yvo miki]

lol hahahah

[Rajat malik]

Thanks for smiling..... I felt nice once again

[yvo miki]

I'm glad lol

[Dark Poet]

Friends are a necessity to stay happy and to keep moving

[yvo miki]

yes they are lol

[Jeyanthi]

Am happy to know that you are getting better :) your poem says how you cherries your friendship ... lol loved your sweet warning at last lines. :)
Am rating it toooo :D

[Destiny Dreamer]

WOW! Friends are really very IMPORTANT in life. It's very Lovely Poem :) Keep writing Friend :)

[Kurai.Merodi]

Love it!!! It really shows the emotion you have for your friends and I love you too!!! I love our little chats :3 So glad we met

[yvo miki]

awww ur sweet and I love u too

[Kurai.Merodi]

>.< :3 thank chu~

[yvo miki]

ur welcome

[ali]

Hope you're well. You've got to learn more about poetry though, or maybe I should. Nevertheless, nice work. :)

[yvo miki]

well thanks a lot

[child of God]

This is beautiful thank you for sharing

[AaronFreitas]

Very touching piece my friend!