Love

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Running in the rain , Her Saffron tainted stole glitters as the water-drops intensifies it's transparency. . It blinded his eyes to all of the world but her body ; beautificated with newly appeared curves on it. His eyes struck with that satanic good look. . His robust arms pulled her wet body towards himself , she lets herself go, like the rain lets go itself , and STUCK! she was near his Chest! His w

et t flaunted his masculine body as she noticed , felt with her bare hands! She could not stop , he could not help! 
The flowers in the garden, hiding under the green pastures , secretly admires this love-making between two high-on lust and rain lovers. . They fall down on the water bed, hidden inside the green grasses , holding each other firmly .. 
And it keeps on raining until the night , wetting the green pastures , flowers , grasses and the twin-souls. .

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Reviews

[written in blood]

I loved the imagery, so sexy and alluring!! great write!! it was like a mini movie played in my mind!!

[yusuf]

Thank You for taking out time to read. Your words made my day. :)

[Damien Davison]

I agree with ThinkingDN, this could be really amazing after being refined and whatnot.
It was a really great, descriptive, emotional scene. Took my mind on a nice journey. Thanks for sharing!

[yusuf]

Thank You So So Much for Stopping by and giving it a read. :)

[DrD]

Very good descriptive quality but I am forced to ask, Yusuf, this is a screenplay? Please advise before I make further comments.

[yusuf]

Thank You Sir. I don't know sir, i think it lacks many aspects to be called a screenplay. May be it is just a scene , a random jotting.

[DrD]

Screne plays have very basic descriptions to only establish the scene without embellishments like metaphors, etc. That's why I asked.

[AYVID N]

I'll give this an A+ for the feeling conveyed. Keep on refining the piece and you'll end up with something mind blowing. Thanks for sharing Yusuf! I loved it!

[yusuf]

Thank You So So So Much!

[AYVID N]

you are welcome!