SuperWoman

Powerful eyes disguising pain , 
Tears as if tamed ;

To be shunned , 
with smile not to blend.

Tall she stand, 
with plastic smile grand.

Shattered and shaken ,
agonys taken.

Her sufferings never revealed,
painful secrets in her lips concealed.

Ordeals taken , 
lonely and forsaken,.

Despite dauntness, 
Herself she firmly harness. 

Strong she be , 
stronger than me.

Seraphic human,
she is superwoman.

Reviews

[Erinne S.]

'Agonys', should actually be spelled 'agonies'. :) My only critique for this piece!
Thank you for sharing another wonderful poem.

~Erinne

[yusuf]

Thank You So much! You always make me improve.

[wendy727]

beautiful.

[yusuf]

Thank You , Wendy.

[Dark Butterfly]

great job!!

[yusuf]

Thank You So Much!

[DrD]

Our world is filled with super women never receiving their due recognition . . . . until now. A very complete homage work that I enjoyed very much.

[yusuf]

I am glad that you enjoyed sir! Thank You so much!

[Sami Khalil]

A nice poem Yusuf. Thank you for penning.

[yusuf]

thank you so much.

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ .You are welcome.

[TravisBriere]

brilliant

[yusuf]

Gracias!

[luviva]

wow... just love it to bits!!" superwoman, this describes the house wives in the poor countries, beaten every single day but they still stand their ground to take care of their children

[yusuf]

thank you so much.

[luviva]

welcme

[Pradeep Nair]

woman....
destined suffer?

shattered an shaken, agony taken.... is that a woman is suppose to be...?
I donno..

Every woman is a superwoman... else how can she exist in this cruel society.?

[yusuf]

Sir I wrote this piece for a specific woman , i know! i ain`t talking about the whole women league! Thank You for taking out time to read! :)

[Pradeep Nair]

It describes every woman, I came across..... Great Job

[yusuf]

thank you sir. :)

[beautiful dreamer]

good poem for the times, theres super people everywhere you turn

[yusuf]

Thank You. :)

[AYVID N]

A woman is about tolerance, patience and quite dignity and strength.
Superb picturisation coming from your words there. So effective, my own mind pictured my mother, an epitome of all the above qualities.
My compliments on the touching piece! Regards, ThinkingDN

[yusuf]

Thank You So Much. You made my day bu understanding the meaning between my words. I am obliged. :)

[AYVID N]

You are welcome! :)