Clouds

Burdened velvety clouds , rising to fall. .

 

Moaning and groaning silently , 

painting the bliss before storm.

 

Enigmatic blanket around ,

 

disguising mystic laborious agents ,

 

they rummage through heaven and hell,

 

to gather crystal drops---

 

ornaments of green bride ,

 

gold-painted cloud , suffused with red,

 

silvery cracking filly, imparting the final touch.

 

Burdened velvety clouds , rising to fall. .

Reviews

[Pradeep Nair]

"Enigmatic blanket around ,
disguising mystic laborious agents ,
they rummage through heaven and hell,
to gather crystal drops----------> It's really enigmatic....

Keep going ..

[yusuf]

Thank You Sir.

[beautiful dreamer]

you have beautiful word choice. i had to read it with my dictionary up, lol. THATS A GOOD THING! jeep writing! Oops, i meant keep :)

[yusuf]

Thank You. :)

[Sami Khalil]

A nice poem. I like the lines:
gold-plated cloud, suffused with red.

[yusuf]

Thank You so much! :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.