I am.

I am. .

I am a melidious merry, 
Of many sins that you carry.

A maliced tinge in the purity , 
Purity in the noir surity. 

I am a fervolent rainbow , 
of a maverick shadow. 

I am the beautiful moonsoon , 
alas! 
harbourer of the doom.

I am the dream in frail , 
a grand Ship that never sails. 

I am the concrete, 
an enigmatic discrete. 

I am hate , 
a delusional fate. 

I am submission , 
A rebellious emission.

I am anti-snob , 
emotionional throb. 

I am lust insatiate , 
an apostate.

I am a bouncing volcano, 
and no where to go. 

I am not what they say ; 
a drowning sea near a bay. 

I am a cross-word puzzle , 
A misty drizzle. 

I am whome i love , 

I am her's, 
their's and his!

Reviews

[Hamza]

the last three lines actually made me smile ..
how true are those words ..
we don't know what we are but we still are ..
elegant and beautiful

[yusuf]

Thanks for the thumbs up accorded dear fellow poet. :)

[Pradeep Nair]

The "I" is towering over the rest.
you are whom you love !

wonderful expressions.

[yusuf]

Thank You So much sir. :)

[DrD]

A thoughtful write exploring the facets of being and discovering the duality of ourselves. I like the truth of this writing and its open honesty. I would caution writings that drive the reader to the dictionary, however, and urge the use of more traditional adjectives.

[yusuf]

Thank You So Much sir!

[Erinne S.]

I really liked this one! Well done :)

~Erinne

[yusuf]

Thank You So Much!

[AYVID N]

just beautiful!
I am not what they say ;
a drowning sea near a bay.

I am a cross-word puzzle ,
A misty drizzle.

WOW! Very pleasing! Thanks, DN

[yusuf]

Thank You So Much.

[beautiful dreamer]

i love your ryhme. i love ryhming poems :) this is such a good poem, don't ever stop writing, it's a god-given gift. don't let anybody take that from you :)

[yusuf]

Thank you. :)

[luviva]

wow//.. just love the flow and rhyme.. a great write and you showcased your skill here..

[yusuf]

Gracias. Your words are emboldening. :)