cheap vodka...and nasty weed

another poem about bridgett

i mean everybody else got a*s

but i got something that would last

she wasnt like any of the girls i met in the past

she was like a bell ringing and im running down the hall to her cuz she had class

shes my earth my brass

my first my last

her worth sur-pass-es

any amount you can fathom

my eve her adam

i need her bad, im

in disbelief at her swagger

i need her badder than i ever did

if i ever did feel this way

i dont remember

she got this effect on me to make me forget anything i ever did before talking to her on the phone

she said she dont want to be alone

so i feel it is my responsibilty to make sure she never has to wonder

she dont even have to like me

i wouldnt care if she hated me

i would love her the same

i got a new tattoo of her face on my brain

im in love so i really cant explain why i did it

i just did it

i asked her what she thought and she said she was wit it

like im with her

see the words are flowing

cuz im knowing

that this poem is like this way im feeling

it will never stop

until i make it stop..........

Reviews

[Deron Anthony]

awww so sweat : P.. i like it. it's deep

[Randal Bright]

I know exactly how you feel man... Great poem! I like it, I like the dialect from it to. Keep it up! I hope everything stays good with her, she'll totally dig that poem too.