Till Midnight

this is something that i was feelingsoo...plz tell me what you thnk...

Till Midnight i'll still love you

Till Midnight i'll still want you

Till Midnight baby i'll pull down the sun for you
so it can radiate along with your warm smile

Till Midnight i'll layy w
ith you and never let you go not

even if the world was about to end

Till Midnight i'll do whatever it takes for you to love

me forever

Till Midnight my love will shine in your eyes wishing this

could last forever

Till Midnight nothing will stop me from loving you to the fullest

Till Midnight i will remember the times we shared until the end of time

Till Midnight blackk skyy...looking outsidee makes me so happy because

i'm looking with you.

                               Till Midnight

VSYOU TiLL MiDNiGHT i'LL STiLL WANT YOU TiLL MiD

Reviews

[Anna Writes]

there's a bit of typo error but i think this is a very lovely poem too...
"Till midnight black sky...looking outside makes me so happy because
i'm looking at it with you.." the first four words 'till midnight black sky, it's kind of vague but
i get the picture. we're looking at the same sky, at the same stars...:) i think it's my fave part..:)

"Till Midnight baby i'll pull down the sun for you
just to see your smile." this is just a suggestion but you can make this to
Till Midnight baby i'll pull down the sun for you
so it can radiate along with your warm smile..:)

but it kept me wondering...why is his/her love only till midnight?

[Bhavya Kaushik]

There's a lot of passion and feel that as a reader I can sense in it. I simply loved the alliteration go "Till Midnight" - that had imparted a great flow to the entire piece.
Overall, its a great piece of writing.