Stolen Moments

Scribbles.

I find myself in a race against time. 

My hands are outstretched

of their own accord

as if to overcome 

the invisible barriers of distance.

But I'll enjoy the stolen moments

while I soak in the heat 

emitting from your body... 

Until I wake up

and succumb to this thing 

called life... 

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Your poetry always reminds me of the ocean... those waves of the surface... the life thriving just beneath... and the dark depths that reach down to the deepest spaces... Here in these lines is such a vast, intimate love... and life... being washed up on the sands... aching for more time. 🌟✨🌟

[Dr. YumnaKay]

That's an interesting breakdown of my writing. Haven't thought about it that way :D

Thank you so much for reading, Craig. x

[An owl on the moon]

Just so grateful you're still here. 🤗

[Davidgeo]

You really do have a beautiful mind.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Heh, for those who dare to look deeper.

Thank you for your words here, Davidgeo :))

[Davidgeo]

How's the dentistry business these days?

[Arundass TP]

Beautiful lines. Each lines are powerful.

[Neville]

if these words are indeed but scribbles, then they are delightfully scribed .. and then some .. Neville

[Chris Shaw]

That final stanza, so powerful. Wonderful poetic expression.

Chris

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thanks so much, Chris. Been away from my husband, which is what inspired this piece :P

[Jaffer]

This is very touching about life and how we want to rest from it. So good.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Ah, not quite the exact interpretation. But I like your take on it. Thank you for your thoughts :D

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so damn expressive...wow!
sometimes I feel distant from life like a lover who lives far away.
and there are moments together that seem as a long distance relationshp.

j.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

A wow from you is quite something, Jacob. Thank you so much for appreciating.

[light and ashes]

Amazing, utterly amazing..

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thanks so much for the review, Light. Much appreciated :D

[light and ashes]

You are so very welcome. It was well worth it.