Words with No Meaning

Words with No Meaning

A Poem by Dr. YumnaKay
"

Literally incoherent.

"



Words trickle 

down the edges of my fingertips.
My brain overflows with thoughts 
and phrases one after another...
And yet, no [coherent] words come out.

I've become prey to my perfectionism.

© 2021 Dr. YumnaKay


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"DANG, DOC!" 😳

That's a gorgeous artwork choice you've selected to compliment your brilliantly rendered, Unrhymed, Unmetered Quatrain, with its (1-line each) Intro 'n Envoi.
"Words with No Meaning"? Hah! The metaphoric imagery, alone, is worth twice the price of entry, not to mention your keen admonishment to relax some of the weight of writing an idealistic poetic paragon-ic crème de la crème … lest one were to turn a goal into literary gaol. 🧐

Stunning work, Lady-Poet, as we've become accustomed from You! ⁓ Richard🖌


[wee hint this presentation: omit free spaces above poem to bring first line with offset artwork into closer harmony … won't hurt to give it a look-see]

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Think, post, edit, delete. It's always good to write. Can't say that I am in anyway, shape or form a perfectionist :)
I understand and enjoyed your words

Posted 2 Years Ago


'Thus conscience doth make cowards of us all' (Hamlet). Thinking too much about it can inhibit the natural flow. Sometimes we have to throw caution to the winds and go for it... We're friends... let's get naked lol.



Posted 2 Years Ago


we are our own worst critics, and sometimes I think we revise ourselves too much until what's natural is lost in the translation.
j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Dr. YumnaKay

2 Years Ago

Aye, so we are...
Thanks so much for the review, Jacob :)

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