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Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Oh, dear Yumna! We gotta talk! Firstly, powerful, poignant words. You always have a way of placing them like seeds in a garden. And secondly, onto your twenty-fifth year... you are one I never doubt will get only better on better with each new year. Promise you won't try and reset your clock. Drink deep everything you were and let the ride be glorious. There is beauty to come... heartache to come... magic to come... light and shadow... and you'll need young Yumna to keep mature Yumna always bright with hope and joy... Take it from a poet who is pretty much near dust to dust.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Ah, thank you so much for your lovely words here, Craig! Truly appreciated. x

[lightsong]

I remember reading this one, but it seems I forgot to leave my review?

magnificent one my friend, You used simple words yet they touch us in the right place, because we look at the clock everyday... and what a dear thought if we really can set it back into the time we wish, though You speak about Your self and Your age but anyone who comes to read this will feel the same, don't worry it will get better as You grow older, or maybe it's just me lol!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I suppose it will be... thank you so much, yet again, for reading and your words here, my friend. :))

[Tinabells]

If it worked...

A hopeful part of the line ..

Thank you for sharing.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for reading and your words here, Tina. :)

[Fairy Khan]

I can relate. Amazing one. I love it.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for reading and appreciating. Glad you could relate.

[Davidgeo]

It may f**k up your original writing scheme but you really should insert 'hour' after "twenty-four" on line 2.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Eek, I really did overlook that word! Thank you so much for pointing out the mistake and for reading, David. Truly appreciated.

[Gee]

Lol, beginning wait until you break forty, fifty, it's like a runaway train.
Hi Doc, hope you are well. Get out and enjoy yerself :))

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hah oh well, so it is...
Been alright, hope you're well too, G. Thank you so much for reading and your words here. :))

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Dr Y, if you think the years are passing too quickly for you now at the ripe old age of 24, wait until you:ve reached your sixties :)) Now wouldn't it be wonderful if we could reset that clock :) I really want time to slow down.

Chris

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Ah, tbh I don't see myself getting to that age, but maybe I'm way too pessimistic about things.
read moreAh, tbh I don't see myself getting to that age, but maybe I'm way too pessimistic about things.
Thank you so much for your words here and for appreciating, Christine. Always appreciated. x

[Chris Shaw]

When I was your age I thought 60 was ancient. When you get there you still think you are 18 :))

[Re-Pete]

time does seem to pass more quickly with age. if only it worked like that ... :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Wish it did... thank you so much for reading and your words here, Pete. Appreciated :)