Preference

Spontaneous write.

In a world where 

everyone craves bodies,

you touched ...my soul.

Reviews

[Ted Kniffen]

There are those so shallow that they only seek that beautiful body with the idea it will give them the love they crave, but when the body puts on a few pounds and more than a few wrinkles, off they go in search of another perfect body.

Touch the mind...touch the soul...you will find...it makes you whole.

Your spontaneous writes are creating quite the stir, Doc. Keep it up.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I agree with that. Seems like some are too eager for bodily experiences than to really get to know a person's soul and what they're made up of... thank you so much for appreciating my pieces and for your thoughts here :))

[Jibey]

The soul is the way to the body. You make the point well, with your pithy last line. I am glad you have been 'touched'.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for your words here, Jibey. Appreciated. :)

[Chris Shaw]

This is beautiful Dr Y. If someone touches your soul while you are on this planet, then you are truly blessed. Love this bit of brevity. You say so much here.

Chris

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I do feel I am. Thank you so much for appreciating and your lovely words here, Christine. Truly appreciated. x

[Chris Shaw]

You are very welcome x

[Kent Rawski]

Ah the forbidden fruit that makes one whole two halves knit together make one soul

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for the poetic review, Kent. Appreciated :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love it...we need more sentiment like this...the spirit, the soul, the heart...much more important than the body...to make love to a mind....that is where it's at.
j.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Aye, that is what we need more. Thank you so much for appreciating and your words here, Jacob. Always appreciated :-)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Another thought provoking 'shortie' as the protagonist celebrates being desired for more than their physical attributes. There is a cynicism I detect but in truth I find it hard to believe everyone simply seeks a body rather than the whole package?

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Not really everyone, yes, but I meant everyone in terms of people I've come across... Thank you so much for your thoughts here, John. Appreciated :-)