Save Me A Spot In Your Heart

Evening scribbles.

Save me a spot in your heart, 

for I will rest there 

and still find my way 

through each of your 

tiny gaps and tiny cracks.

Save me a spot in your heart,

and I will leak through

your very essence,

like you ebb and

flow through mine;

a constant reminder,

that I am no longer

just me...

Save me a spot in your heart;

my heart ~ is tired ...

Author's Note

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Very creative, Lady Yumna,
The way you've ended with your heart tired and fading away, blending into the soothing comfort of your lover's is sheer genius … you're tops!
As you know, I not only write in structured rhyming poetry, I've many Free Verse pieces posted, as-well, and I thoroughly enjoy a well-written version of this form … yours here is definitely an exemplary example.
Presentation, emotion, metaphor, spot-on syntax and line-breaks, choice of picture, font, and greyed hue set the perfect moment and nuance of romantically poignant passion and fervor that leads from lovers' attractions to their melding into one entity … beautiful!
Love the perfect accompanying music choice, too!

Love has captured You, and through your excellent poetry, Us … thank you! ⁓ Richard 🌼

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Your words here made me smile. Thank you so much for appreciating this one, Richard. Glad you like it :)))

[Samuel Robert Sands]

Absolutely beautiful I love this

[barleygirl]

Having done page layout all my life on the job, I love it when a writer uses typography in a striking but subtle way (most go overboard, in my opinion). The ending text shading is exquisite, in the same vein as your messages are often subtle, & I love the subtlety of this one. I love the barely-there descriptions of seeping, which seems to be the crux of this intertwining experience (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This review made my night! :D Your approval always encourages me to write more. Thank you so much for appreciating and your lovely words, BG! Hugs back :)))

[Coyote Poetry]

A spot in someone heart.
"Save me a spot in your heart;
my heart ~ is tired"
The above lines. "
I understand the above lines. My friend. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you too for liking this one, John. Appreciated :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy my friend and you are welcome.

[Neville]

A real delight to read these words... over and over.... N

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I'm glad you found it so. Thanks so much, Neville. :)))

[Neville]

super words and true x

[Carol Cashes]

THAT LAST LINE, THOUGH! Love letter...love letter...love letter...wham! If you don't take me in, I'll be homeless.

I'm sure that you had, and others perceive, a more somber flavor for this, but my reaction was spontaneous and knee jerk. Good writing does that to a body, you know.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I like how you say that. It is certainly my vulnerable side speaking...
thank you so much for appreciating, Carol. Glad to have you back around. :))

[Einstein Noodle]

great pic... super intimate moments ... really appreciate the work you did to make that closing line fade ... how precious to be able to reveal such vulnerability to another .. let me rest here in your heart ... i am still with you alive and well .. but i just need a bit of rest right now ... the "tiny gaps and cracks" hits me particularly ... its like knowing and loving places one thinks are not lovable ... i think this is a romantic but kept it real poem ..
E.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Aye, that was the intention. I'm glad you appreciate, Einstein. Thank you so much for your lovely words here. :)

[Ranger Kessel]

Pretty bad a $$ write in my opinion. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Nice tie ins as well. Thank you for sharing

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I'm glad you enjoyed. Thank you so much :))

[Chris Shaw]

I love the image that you have posted alongside your words Dr Y. They work very well together. Much love and tenderness woven into your lines. Happy New Year poet. All the best for 2019.

Chris

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for appreciating this one, Christine. Glad you like it. Happy New Year to you too. x

[Chris Shaw]

I've come back for a second reading. This is such a lovely poem Dr Y.

Chris

[Jon Roggie]

This is why I would like to have you as one of my doctors. You distract me with your words!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hah I'm not as good in verbal skills, I think, so you'll be disappointed ;) Thank you so much for your flattering review, Jon. Glad you were distracted for a bit ;)

[emmajoy]

Here is the poem that tells me so much. If real, more than a masterpiece. If a dream or picture pictured, your mind's playing the most beautfiful game with you. Though paced, controlled.. as it slows it takes off into a nother place for me [ somehow. This is a poem to remember, Yumna.

' a constant reminder, - that I am no longer - just me... '

[Dr. YumnaKay]

My mind does often play games with me, sometimes I like to let it flow free..Thank you so much for your lovely words, Em. Glad you appreciate. x

[emmajoy]

Take care of yourself, please - now and into the New Year, ever and onwards. :) .