Between Neverminds & Nothings ...

Sunday night scribbles. Spontaneous write.

Somewhere between your

timid neverminds and

my haughty nothings,

 

love found its way,

peeking shyly with just

a touch of awkwardness

that bursts forth at

times but not before

rendering us dumb,

if just for a moment ...

Reviews

[LazerRays]

There's nothing like an awkward romance, eh? It's completely dorky but there's just something beautiful about it. It's the most wonderful type of love, truly afraid to lose the other person. Haha- hopefully those two in the poem stay together forever, as it seems they love each other to death; awkwardness and all.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

::P Thank you so much for your words here, Sarah. Always appreciated. x

[LazerRays]

;) ya welcommmmmmeeeee

[andrew mitchell]

nice one doc, simply said but beautifully expressed.. one of my favs of yours.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for appreciating my scribbles, Andrew. Glad you like it :))

[Jibey]

The first stages of love are often awkward... and the next stages... and, well, come to think of it... lol I like those speechless moments.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hahah oh, love is a strange thing in itself, I suppose lol
thank you so much for reading, Jibey :)