Writersblock (?)

Ramblings. I can't write for s**t, I realized.

Reviews

[LazerRays]

actually, this isnt bad yumna. haha. i think white is very eerie. (still cant figure out why anyone would want to be a whitey... sorry- off topic) theres nothing. and its blank. like when the TV fizzes out and you get that awful blue screen of no signal. (and then it bursts into static and scares the hell outta you)
but yeah- luckily with paper theres no jumpscare. which sometimes is worse.... oh the anticipation for it to be filled..... waiting... tick tock tick tock....

idk where i was going with this review. so heres the moral: Thumbs up!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Nah, I think you're right on point here. I just randomly scribbled this out of frustration of not writing anything meaningful and satisfying... I like your thoughts. Thanks so much for the thumbs up, my friend. x

[LazerRays]

The drop for tears? Sigh....

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Eh not really tears. I was more aiming for a diamond shape lol but I suck. Will give it another shot :x

[LazerRays]

Structure... Grr. Haha.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

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[LazerRays]

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[LazerRays]

Ya know, I like this shape. Spear? The Romans loved spears... :D
spear all! Spare no one!read moreYa know, I like this shape. Spear? The Romans loved spears... :D
spear all! Spare no one!
Senãtus populusque rõmãnus!!!! Atttttttaccckkk!!!!! Mwahahahaha! ;)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

lol I think I like the shape better now too :P it was really an attempt to make you like structured poetry though hahaha

[LazerRays]

:P hahaha YEAH

[Richard🖌]

In as much that you've (sorta) acclaimed this creative form, it could be made into an exclamation point, eh? ! (I'll message an example).
It could be a fingernail, a guitar pick, a rising thought or hot air balloon … well-formed, with very smooth edges; excellently done!

You're sooo entertaining and interesting, Yumna … full of surprises! ⁓ Richard : )

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You do give interesting shape ideas for me to work on here, Richard! Thank you so much for appreciating this one :D hah, full of surprises? I like that expression about myself ;P

[Richard🖌]

You're like a glorious, ever-changing chameleon. 🌈🍡

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

i do love this
love the shape and the words
the simplicity and beauty is here love it

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much, Julie. I'm glad you appreciate :)

[Rosalie Kempthorne]

Love the shape, love the sentiment expressed, love the economy of words, and especially the truth or dare bit at the end - it's the perfect description.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much. I'm glad you like it :-)

[Tamara Beryl Latham]

Your poem offers the reader the opportunity to realize your great insight on the subject of writing. All too often, what you have penned has been a reality for many a writer.

Great job! Thanks for sharing your thoughts. :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Writing, for me, is a blessing as well as a curse..thank you so much for your thoughts here and for appreciating :-)

[john l smith]

a sad situation we all go through
At least you have framed it quite attractively
Dave

[Dr. YumnaKay]

The least it is, yes.
Thanks so much for reading :-)

[Stacy Purvis]

Very nice...short, concise. The display is tantalizing. Great job 👏🏼

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for reading and appreciating, Anastasia. Good to see you around here once again :))

[barleygirl]

One of the best & most original statements about writers block & there are millions on a website like this! Becuz your build-up was so exquisite, I was hoping the ending would be sufficiently brilliant & it was. Truth or dare . . . that's the crux of it, in my book. The more truthful we can be, the better it gets (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I actually wrote this piece out of inspiration and just mulled around with the shape to kill time :x
And yes, abs! I found out later on my expense, truth in writing does a matter a lot. Thank you so much for reading and appreciating, BG :)

[barleygirl]

It's rare to get such a clean edge on your text shape without doing this as an image!

[Chris Shaw]

I like this Dr Y, it resonates with me as a writer. There is much truth in what you have written.

Chris

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thanks so much for reading and liking, Christine. :-)