Disguised ~ In My Poems

Ramblings. Scribbled hastily.

Your silence howls,

deafening, as I coil

and recoil; my

serpentine thoughts

have no end and

nor does your

absence.

I have lost control

of my fingers

as they scroll down

on their own,

the pixels on screen

blurring even more

with time;

one sole digital

image screams

its denial,

yet, I seek to

remember you in places

I'd never sought...

you are the artwork

disguised in my poems.

Reviews

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Wonderful when there’s something that brings such meaning to things we express- we then have lived and experienced and hopefully learnt- sometimes it’s just for a matter of time a space a place in time then it’s gone - only memories remain- your words making one think🌹

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for your words here, my friend. Glad it made you think :)

[barleygirl]

I have always wished that I could write with total abandon, as you describe doing here. Even when I write reviews, I'm laced up too damn tight. It's a joy to read something that really feels like raw expression, but also with a natural artfulness (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I think it's a lot to do with me being restless in my skin and mind that sometimes I don't really bother with structure and write it out like it comes out. I'm glad you appreciate. I always love reading your reviews on my pieces. Thank you so much, BG. Hugs back

[emmajoy]

' I seek to ~ remember you in places ~ I'd never sought..
you are the artwork ~ disguised in my poems. '

Here you are again, creating words that challenge the imagination and - with only a choice of twenty-six letters! You touch emotions with such a sleight of hands, switch from this to that with only a single breath of.. whatever it is you have for your favourite meal! Beautiful this is, full of something special.. and maybe the reason you're wearing glasses so you can see 'whatever' even more clearly?!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Your review here made me smile. Sometimes, those glasses are quite a hinderance to really see... Thank you so much for your lovely words and for appreciating, Em. x

[Jibey]

Sometimes the words that come to us on the spur of the moment capture our minds best. This writing captured my imagination.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I agree. Thank you so much for appreciating this one, Jibey :)

[LazerRays]

His is officially my favorite poem that you've written :) it's incredible what you can do with that brilliant mind of yours isn't it? :P

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You made me smile (here). Funnily enough, I wrote it while we were conversing today. ;)
I wouldn't call my mind brilliant but thank you for the lovely compliment, Sarah. Glad you like this one. :)

[LazerRays]

You are brilliant yumna. Even though you're too humble to admit it lol. XD
haha!

[Ardra]

You are the artwork disguised in my poem...love that line Yumna...
:)

Like the words and imagery created... and crafted in beautiful manner... .

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thanks so much for liking, Ardra. I think I like that line too ;)