Dizzy Lizzy (Limerick)

Another limerick. Dedicated. Lol

There once lived a girl named Lizzy, 

who was more oft tired than busy.

Lost in her daydreams, 

she used to then scream ...

doing homework made her dizzy...!

Reviews

[LazerRays]

Aha! I spy an anime pictureeeeee! :D
hahaha!

This Poem made me smile yumna XD
it's hilarious and definetly applies to Americans with ADHD :D
this was really fun to read- :P

(I've never been good at reviews anyways so I apologize- I am not a reviewer person. This is me trying)

-Sarah

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Haha I'm glad you like this one. It was definitely written for an American. ;) lol
I like that anime pic somehow :x :P
Thank you so much for appreciating, Sarah x

[Wanda Vergara-Yates]

I resemble that limerick all the time.

[¿]

The bell of my school memories have been rung again by this limerick!
But still I feel I'll be wrapping up my homework tomorrow...cause some are never gonna finished....I like this girl's glittery eyes here...and the way she has tucked her lips then screamed out...tomorrow!😄
Thanks for sharing this Yumna :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

haha hey, I hope you finish your homework in time! :P lol thank you so much for appreciating, Tahsin. I'm not an anime person, but I rather like that image myself ;P I'm glad you like it :))

[¿]

Sometimes....am too lazy😴
You're very welcome!☺

[Dr. YumnaKay]

:P I was even lazier when I reached uni. haha

[¿]

Same pinchu!😃

[Chris Shaw]

What a day for a daydream ..oops there I go. I'm guilty. Very nice little limerick and I very much appreciated your posted image. Thank you Dr Y. All good wishes to you.

Chris

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Daydreaming ain't half bad. I'm guilty of that too ;) Thank you so much for reading and appreciating, Christine. Wishing you a lovely start of the month. x

[emmajoy]

I still find it hard to equate your limericks with the intense poetry of a lifetime away, SP! Methinks your sense of humour is absorbing Autumnal colours and your words becoming just a little adventurous. Wondering about the metre count in this limerick.. but love the grin it's brought me. Must go, visitors drawing up as I put full stop! Hugs.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I try to figure out which one feels closer to me, but of course I do feel better and more confident about my serious writes. But I do like to explore if I have a humorous side, which is where limericks like these come from :P Ah re the meter count, I'm glad you pointed that out. I've been tinkering with it a bit and might as well change it to a proper one, wasn't sure at first. So glad it brought a grin to your face, Em. Thank you so much for liking and reading x

[emmajoy]

Tis said that to laugh and love makes life worth living. You and others provide the first: nowt said about the latter - for now!!! My pleasure. x

[Onlyme]

Cute poem. That made me smile and lol.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much, Dawn. Glad it made you smile :))

[Ardra]

Cute one Yumna... :)
Made me smile....
Feel like that everyday heheh now it's work...not home work...:p ( oh ya home work also :/ )

[Dr. YumnaKay]

True. I guess we females never get rid of that 'home work' :/ :P I'm glad it made you smile, Ardra. Thank you so much for reading :)

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Know this feeling well - especially doing my 'tax returns' - loved it - great little ditty :-)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

:D haha I can imagine how that feels like :x
Thank you so much for liking, Phill :))

[Najam Us Saher]

Sounds like my siblings 😁
Just showed the image to my sister saying, 'This is you' she laughed.
Enjoyed reading this one. Especially the image😄

[Dr. YumnaKay]

haha yeah lol kids these days :P I'm glad you enjoyed reading this one, Najam. Thank you so much :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You are most welcome. 😄

[barleygirl]

Glad to see you dipping your pen back into the limerick bottle again! *wink! wink!* To me, line 2 seems to have a bit of an awkward sound, as far as the English construction of it. It seems like it needs the word "more" (tired than busy). For example: "who was oft more tired than busy" . . . or some other possible tweak. To me this sounds like a "dog ate my homework" excuse, except nowadays I guess kids are more into using their neuroses as excuses (we didn't know about neuroses, back when I had homework, so we had to blame the dog) *smile* Fondly, Margie

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Ah yes, I've been thinking of tweaking that line and I do like your suggestion.
hah that dog excuse was around my days too, although frankly, I quite liked doing homework, in fact was the kind to stay late in school to finish mine so I could play at home :P
Thank you so much for reading through my limericks, BG. Always appreciated :))

[barleygirl]

I was a nerd that did extra homework for fun . . .

[Neville]

I used to daydream all the time, tis a mental defense mechanism ya know and I distinctly recall that feeling too... nice one.. Neville

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Aye, aye. Sometimes the best escape. Thank you so much for liking this one, Neville :)

[Neville]

you are most deserving and welcome my friend... Neville