She Paints ~ Her Life's Canvas

Experimental. Just a touch dreamy. ..

She paints, in ecstasy ~ her life's canvas.

A beautiful image flooded her mind,

brought alive by the tip of her fingers,

as a gibbous moon above her lingers.

As enthralled she was in the nightly glow;

smoke-stained clouds, to oblivion, drifted,

and the shadowy doubts, at last, lifted.

In ecstasy, she paints ~ her life's canvas.

Reviews

[θεά]

Wow Yumna,

Seems like you know this person! And the person seems like quite a dreamer, finally waking up and seeing the light of the day. Hopefully, this time the dreamer would paint brighter colors on her canvas of life.

Very surreal. Yet so real.

Kudos,
M.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Aye. While it maybe dreamy, it is personal for me as well...
Thank you so much for your lovely words here and for appreciating, Mallika. x

[angel]

Now, this is beautiful. I really enjoyed reading it, and the presentation is breathtaking.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for appreciating, angel. Glad you enjoyed reading :-)

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Absolutely superb poem and image Yumna! Ethereal, astral, evocative imagery. Wonderful title and theme. We paint our our “life’s canvas” in everything we do. “Brought alive by the tips of her fingers”- great line. Graceful language and verses. Uplifting last verse and line. A lovely dreamscape.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for your beautiful review of this piece, Annette! I'm humbled :)

[Simone Davis]

To me it's describing someone who perhaps has insomnia and has nothing but their thoughts to think about and wishing to go back to that blank canvas new start.... great write.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I like your interpretation here which mirrors the state of mind this was written in...thank you so much for your words here and for appreciating :-)

[Flowers of Eternity]

This poem has a strong imagery!
It's beautiful!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for your lovely words and for liking :-))

[Flowers of Eternity]

Your welcome!

[LazerRays]

Aye, painting is my language. You had me there. And of course, the best language of all is colors. this person speaks that fluently
Nice job

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for liking this one, Sarah. Appreciate your words here 💜

[Relic]

This is a beautifully crafted poem, Dr. The repeating 'f' letters help the lines drift into each other effortlessly. The images and the ability to bring out the superlative characteristics of the poems actor is flawless also.

A great read.

100/100

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Ah, I did not actually notice that I used the f letter words repeatedly until I read your review. read moreAh, I did not actually notice that I used the f letter words repeatedly until I read your review.
Thank you so much for your kind words and for appreciating this piece, Tim. Glad you like it :-)

[Chris Shaw]

Brevity can offer us some gems. I like this poem so much, it is so uplifting and offers some great imagery as well. Wonderful pen Dr Y.

Chris

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I'm glad you found it uplifting. Thank you so much for appreciating, Christine :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful written dear friend. Each line, meaningful and worthwhile. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for appreciating and your words, John. :))

[Coyote Poetry]

I do and you are welcome my friend.

[Carolynn]

I like the way you begin and end with (almost) the same line yet you change the meaning ever so slightly. a very beautiful and dreamy piece :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This style is something which I keep experimenting in often, some of my previous non rhyming pieces are that way too. I'm glad you like this one. Thank you so much for appreciating, Carolynn. :-)

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

This is a masterpiece all in it's own Yumna. It washes me in peace and tranquility.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Ah, I'm glad it made you feel that way, Queenie. Thank you so much for appreciating. 💜