Fiery Skies (Shape Poem)

Experimental. Shape Poem (?)

​FIERY SKIES

I

as a 

bolt of fire 

would strike 

heavens and 

 earth while 

 dangling 

 from the 

skies 

~

Reviews

[LazerRays]

This fire reminds me of how the ancient Greeks believed that fire could burn your mortal essense of your soul away and you would become immortal. The poem had a powerful godlike aurora to it.
Me: *touchy the fire*
does your fire make me immortal? Or is it just Elijah calling down for god to burn the altar?

[Dr. YumnaKay]

That's an inteesting point.
Haha so you're looking for being immortal? That has never been in my plans :P
Thank you for reading and your thoughts, Sarah. Appreciated 😊

[Neville]

the very shape of things to come methinks.... nice..... N

[Dr. YumnaKay]

:D thank you for liking, Neville!

[Neville]

I did indeed.......... N

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like the flame shape of this...and the perfect symmetry...

begins with one, expands and then ends with one....as do two people in love.
j.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I like your words here, Jacob. Thank you so much for liking :)

[barleygirl]

Nicely creative idea that plants a fulsome image in the reader's mind (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for appreciating this little experiment, BG. 💜

[Vivian Gospel]

I shouldnt get too close then.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

If you really are afraid.............. ;)
Lol thanks for reading, Vivian! :D