Another adventure
in a brand new form,
to spread your wings
much higher than norm.
Sheer eye-candy, so beautifully built and presented, dear poetess … this is the epitome of elegance in visual and emotional poetic bliss.
Deeply imaginative and heart touching, your poetic imagery and Concrete image compliment each the other with equal grace, and that picture … OMG, it's scrumptiously gorgeous to the mind's-eye, setting a perfect ambience for your moment.
What a pleasure it is, YumnaKay, to enjoy your every new effort … KUDOS! ⁓ Richard : )
:D and you, of all people, know that I'll be bugging you for a long time to teach me new poetic form.. read more:D and you, of all people, know that I'll be bugging you for a long time to teach me new poetic forms hahah
Thank you so much, Richard! I'm humbled by your appreciation. 🌺🍃💜
Do you realize how lazy I try to be?
Now you had to add a beautiful poem in the shape of a dew drop.
I despair when I consider my own creativity.
Now, after the complaints,
lovely poem!
:D hahah let's be lazy together lol I promise not to try writing in this form again ;)
Thank .. read more:D hahah let's be lazy together lol I promise not to try writing in this form again ;)
Thank you so much for appreciating, Jon. Glad you like it :))
6 Years Ago
Try a ramble. A touch of silly can be an eye opener!
This is a vision in artistic form. I have read it several times just to soak in all the alluring features from the way the eye rolls down like a drop the fantasm in color contrast... to the meaning of the word and thoughts inside my soul. Your experiment is a great success!
Uh uh, I didn't even realize until now that it sorts of rhymes! That limerick writing has rubbed off.. read moreUh uh, I didn't even realize until now that it sorts of rhymes! That limerick writing has rubbed off on me lool
thank you so much for your lovely words here, Neville. Glad you like it x
Another adventure
in a brand new form,
to spread your wings
much higher than norm.
Sheer eye-candy, so beautifully built and presented, dear poetess … this is the epitome of elegance in visual and emotional poetic bliss.
Deeply imaginative and heart touching, your poetic imagery and Concrete image compliment each the other with equal grace, and that picture … OMG, it's scrumptiously gorgeous to the mind's-eye, setting a perfect ambience for your moment.
What a pleasure it is, YumnaKay, to enjoy your every new effort … KUDOS! ⁓ Richard : )
:D and you, of all people, know that I'll be bugging you for a long time to teach me new poetic form.. read more:D and you, of all people, know that I'll be bugging you for a long time to teach me new poetic forms hahah
Thank you so much, Richard! I'm humbled by your appreciation. 🌺🍃💜
How cool is that whole thing. I love the shape of the drop and the change in font colors. and the writing is a little piece of perfection. Great job Doc!!!!
I did have a fair few tries on it before I git the shape right but I'm glad it seems to have turned .. read moreI did have a fair few tries on it before I git the shape right but I'm glad it seems to have turned out okay being that this was my first attempt at writing concrete poetry ;)
Thank you so much for appreciating and your lovely words, Crowley! 😊