Ruining Ferraris (Limerick)

English Limerick.

There once was a puppy named Kahri,
who cruised in the desert safari.
His butt stuck like toffee
when he pottied coffee,

and ruined his master's Ferrari!

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

I think it's adorable. Suggestion, thinking you are maybe not entirely happy with it due to the near rhyme with the name, which could easily be fixed unless the poem is actually dedicated to a human of that name or a puppy with that name. If that is the case my suggestion would be to somehow denote the pronunciation in the formatting of the name.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Yes, I realized my dissatisfaction was partly due to that so I changed the name :p and ah, it's based on pure imagination - no one of my acquintance here owns a dog haha
Thank you for your suggestion, Lyn. Glad you found this adorable 😊

[Lyn Anderson]

Yay! So now I think the name should be a silly one to rhyme with safari and ferrari so like Kari or Sahri etc to exactly match.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

:P you have me on the name part, thanks again :))

[Lyn Anderson]

I love it. yes, that sounds awesome.

[Wanda Vergara-Yates]

Too, too funny. Perfectly done.

[Alessander]

This made me chuckle a bit. The image fits too.
It's good to be silly sometimes esp for melodramatic artists like moi :P

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I'm glad it made you chuckle :D and yes, def a nice change for me to be silly haha
Thanks so much for appreciating :))

[Verse]

Sacandalous, girl!!! This is adorable! This from someone who can’t write a limerick to save her life. :):)

V

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hahah well, writing limericks did save my life in a way or I would be drowning in depression :x ;P I'm glad you like this one, V. Thank you so much :))

[Verse]

Yes, my friend. Me, too. :):)

[john l smith]

These are all great
How can anyone be mad at a puppy

[Dr. YumnaKay]

;p I wouldn't know 'cause I haven't owned one. Thanks so much for reading, john :)

[LazerRays]

Mmm. Naughty puppy! That puppy probably sleeping outside now! Hopefully he doesn't ruin another car :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

;P haha hopefully! lol
thank you for reading and your words here, Sarah :))

[Beccy]

I had a cat once, name PJ. I took her to the seaside with me in the car and halfway there she did a potty on the back parcel shelf. Unfortunately for the both of us, she'd eaten something that disagreed with her and it ran like a river. I never did entirely get the smell out and I spent a fortune on air fresheners and sprays before I part exchanged it, (the car that is.)

PJ passed on just over eight years ago now, but her 'gift' is still very fresh in my memory :))

Beccy.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I've never owned cats and dogs as pets but have always thought that it might be like that. ;) memories have a funny way of overstaying their welcome, I guess. Lol
Thank you for sharing your experience here and for reading, Beccy. Appreciated :)

[Melissa]

Gross!!!!!!!! and funny :) I have a feeling Kari is going to be looking for a new home soon.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

:D haha thank you! Glad you found it funny :))

[Richard🖌]

Hey, Doc! : D
Excellent poetry, great flow, and spot-on rhymes … wow!
This is gobsmackin' hilarious, and just look at that dog's mischievous grin as he's tooling along, ears flapping in the wind, his paw filled with gay colored balloons, and what a cool Ferrari.
The whole idea is simply ridiculously rollicking fun!

You really outdid yourself with this one, Lady-Poet … KUDOS!!! ⁓ Richard 🤪

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Your praises keep me going on these silly limerick adventures! :D Thank you so much for appreciating and your helpful critique on this one, Richard!

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Ha ha ha - good light humoured write! Mind you … it could have been something else the puppy excreted to ruin the upholstery … than he would be in the 'dog house, not the car! ah bliss … :-)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

haha hmm wish I could have come up with the idea before lool thanks for the fun review, Phill! Appreciated :))

[Peter]

Hey like the poem, and love the balloons. Very nice.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you. Glad you like it :)