Soap Bubble (Limerick)

Another fun write. Bad luck strikes - I had one helluva fit of sneezing for hours after I finished writing this one and showed it to my sister. She said 'serves you right!' :p

Reviews

[emmajoy]

What a change of direction for you, Yumna. Such wit! Seems you've discovered a smile a minute is worth its weight of tears in a bucket with a large hole!

Tis great to see you back, you've been missed. But, do remember to reflect your feelings, dear friend.. whenever..

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Aye, so I discovered. It doesn't do good to dwell in negativity so I decided to bring out my lighter, silly side ;)
I'm glad you like this change, Emma. Thank you so much for appreciating. 😊

[emmajoy]

Whatever brightens your day is what really matters,
dear Yumna.

[lightsong]

When a sis focusing on lecturing her sister something unexpected happens! ask me about it ;)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Aye, aye. Always like this lol I have 3 sisters! 😶😛 Thank you for reading :))

[lightsong]

hhhaa I have only one, with three well.... it would be really something! ;)

may You always be happy together!

[Benson Osuji]

Hilarious, really enjoyed your limerick. Thanks for sharing

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

I'll leave the question as to whether this limerick is within the rules or not to experts. This, I think. Is a very charming picture

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Ah, I know, the syllable count isn't correct in this 😶 I'm still struggling with that but not giving up :D
Thank you so much for still reading and appreciating, Lyn :)

[Lyn Anderson]

I don't count syllables. I just read them aloud. :) shhh don't tell Richard

[Crowley]

lol...I love to see this clever and light side of you. This was amazing and funny. Loved it!!!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

:D I'll admit, I like this side of me too! Thank you so much for appreciating, Crowley 😊

[Gee]

I think you could lose the " but" at the start of line 3.
Enjoyed the read

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I was struggling with that line tbh, but wouldn't removing 'but' make the syllable count less? I like your suggestion though. Thank you so much for reading, Gee. Glad you enjoyed :)

[Gee]

I very syllable count when rhyming as if it reads right then in my mind it is.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

yes, I think you're right here.

[Gee]

I very rarely.....oops

[barleygirl]

I'm very much enjoying the view as your limerick obsession develops *smile* (keep going!) I love limericks and you take this poetic form to new places with your fresh approach, which is always fun to see! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Obsession is the word alright! :D I just thought I've been to much into serious and sappy writing and wanted to bring out my humurous side a bit. I'm glad you think my approach is fresh, that makes me wanna dance hahaha
Thank you so much for appreciating, BG! x

[barleygirl]

I know what you mean -- after I write a serious piece, I crave a bit of silly rhyming obsession! *smile*

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Ah, and I'll be honest with you, whenever I read your rhyming pieces (there are loads of 'em!) I always marvel at your patience and skill of coming up with rhymes while maintaining the meaning within a poetry! Gonna take a leaf too many outta your book! ;) :D