Amidst all the chaos...

Tired ramblings (as my writes usually are these days)...

And amidst all the chaos, I still strive for self control, 

I still strive to conquer self. 

Amidst all the chaos, all I'm left with is a raging storm 

which threatens my crumbling sanity. 

 

Reviews

[ms. barrie]

eloquently poignant ink,
i adore the ardent honesty,
real-ness your pen spilled,
not only makes this write relatable but inspiring.
cannot help but admire
the quietude of strength
raging within, ready to patiently triumph over chaos, etc ~ this piece really resonates with me...
thank you for sharing ~ x

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for your lovely words, ms.barrie. I'm glad it resonated with you. x

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked and I understood the words and thoughts in the poetry. The struggle to stay sane in our world. Isn't easy sometimes. Thank you dear poet for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Dr. YumnaKay]

It's never easy, yeah. Thank you so much for reading and appreciating.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right dear friend and you are welcome.

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

We feel your pain. We seek to shape our clay, only to find that bigger hands are working against us in this matter. We can only be true to our self and ride out the chaotic karmic imbalance, until we rise above.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for your words here. Appreciated.