Palpable

Ramblings of a raging mind. Written with an angry/disappointed mindset. Not really thought over structure. To be edited later.

we have thrown

the curtains, of uncertainties

now washed ashore.

Everything is new,

everything is palpable

in your eyes;

everything is not

how it seems

and I am dust

particles in air,

my breath, anesthetized.

I silently scream

my disapproval.

Everything crumbles,

we are mere ashes

in the distant storms.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

When sadness and pain overtake us. No-place to go.
"Everything crumbles,
we are mere ashes
in the distant storms."
The above line, hard and so true. Thank you my friend for sharing the powerful poetry.
Coyote

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for reading and appreciating :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome dear Poet.

[barleygirl]

Your tumbling imagery delivers the idea of being tossed about in a vat of conflicting sensations. This could be the poster child for two people coming from completely different directions! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Just came by this review of yours...!
I like how you phrased that. It was/is exactly that way.
Thank you so much for reading and your words here. Always appreciated. x

[emmajoy]

Such intense words, wondering 'if'.. Sometimes, you seem to echo my thoughts, don't know how.
'... and I am dust particles in the air.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Not sure if I should be glad that I echoed your thoughts here, Em, but thank you so much for reading and thinking over my words. As always appreciated. xx

[emmajoy]

Dear little friend, I always try to think over other people's words - tis all one has at times.. just words.
Your heart weeps at times.. make me sad for you. Hugs.

[Ghania]

Great! Curtains of Uncertainties. :")

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for appreciating, Ghania. :)

[Ghania]

You're welcome.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

interesting how it is when one part of the couple thinks everything is just fine, being so unaware that the cracks are getting bigger, and the other is drifting away.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Interesting interpretation. Thank you for your words here, Jacob. Appreciated.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

The words here reek of frustration... and the format made it even more compelling, it almost felt rebellious.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for appreciating, Travis. Glad it felt that way, which was the intention. ..