Naivety

Random scribbles. Spontaneous write.

My naivety knows

no limits,

in love with

the idea of love,

I seek solace

in your words.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

looking for solace in my words??? she is naive ;))) of course thats not how i read this Dr. you leave the place of solace completely to the reader ..could be a hot bath..hot tattie, hot momma ;) my first thought is to my Bible and prayer ..my greatest place of comfort ...you poem starts with innocence ..then a realization that comes from experience ... and then a more real turning to someone either in person to talk to ..or perhaps a poet one especially "hears" ... such a simple poem that sparks so many avenues for me.. i think of trying to guide my children who suffered that anomaly of in love with love .. oh such dread i had ..especially for my girls ...whats a dad to do? ;}
E.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I'm glad it sparked such thoughts, Einstein (on a ligter note, you chose your penname well 😉) read moreI'm glad it sparked such thoughts, Einstein (on a ligter note, you chose your penname well 😉)
It's more wishful thinking for me than anything else btw...
Thank you so much for your lovely review. Appreciated :)

[Einstein Noodle]

:) .......................

[barleygirl]

This is a simple straightforward few words about an idea many people have experienced, but reading this made me shudder. I squirm to think back on when I was THIS naive about love. Now I'm so jaded, I'm not sure if I'll ever find my way back to a happy balance. I love how your poem sounds so fresh & honest & without guile or conniving (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[lightsong]

Ohh!! something I can relate to so very well!! I can be as naive as You can dear Yuman lol to be sweetly naughty in love adds more excitement, so keep that little girl of You play here and there sometimes, sweet and lovely one, thank You*

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Guess we've all had our fair share of naivety ;) I agree, it does add a touch of adventure momentarily which is what we crave, perhaps... Thank you so much for your lovely words, Light. Appreciated :))

[Mr.Writer]

A crisp, beautiful and emotional piece.. I love this!
Great job Yumna! :))

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Shaan. Glad you like it. :)
Nice to see you back around here 😊

[Mr.Writer]

No problem Yumna! :) Thank youu

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we just keep looking in all the wrong places...and find the same thing....but we never learn, do we?
i eventually learned but i think i would rather still be naive...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I agree with your thoughts. Thank you for your words here, Jacob. Appreciated.