Songs

Inspired.

I sleep

with songs of love; a mere echo

befalling my ears

my eyes caressing

the shape of your

marble lips,

an imprint

engraved upon the inside

of my eyelids

till I wake

enchanted, by the music

of your rhythm ...

Reviews

[Neville]

A delightful poem indeed
A delight to consider
A pleasure to read, N

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for your words here, Neville. Glad you like it (:

[BBP]

In your classic style is sweet and sophisticated! 💕

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for your lovely words, Bev! Glad you appreciate 😊

[Tony Jordan]

Once seen - their countenance is forever
Their presence a symphony that never grows old.
You are inspiring the romantic soul in me talented poet.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Ah I'm glad to have inspired it, though I do think that might be an exaggeration ;)
Thank you for appreciating, TJ 😊😊

[Tony Jordan]

Me - exaggerate - why my grandfather's own father made the moon from cheesy garlic bread and put it into the sky by his-self. Exaggerate...me...hmphh...the very idea.

welcome Yumna :))

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Noo Tonyyy you're ruining my image of the moon!! Lol

[Tony Jordan]

Lol - well it might just be a myth...
you can go back to adoring the lunar body. ;))

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Of course, no one can stop me! :p i'm a moonchild hahah 😊😜😍

[Tony Jordan]

Oh I wish Gru had kept the moon when he shrunk it muwahhha

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Lol yeah could have come as handy to knock someone down 😂😂

[Tony Jordan]

Lmao - using the moon like a bowling ball. That's class!! haha
I would use it to lure moths and then deep-fry them in chocolate and breadcrumbs

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Urrrggh how devilish....!! 😎😜

[Tony Jordan]

😈 oh yeah... that's how I rolllll
muwahhahaha

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank God now I get to know!! Hahah 😎😜

[Tony Jordan]

Dash it!
I revealed another layer of my onion !! hahah

[Dr. YumnaKay]

It's supposed to be hollow when everything's revealed so you don't really qualify as that 😉😉

[Tony Jordan]

The moon is hollow ! It rings instead of thunks...lol

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Most of the times it just hangs up there and smirks lol 😛

[Tony Jordan]

if you hit it with a stone - me and my grandfather do it all the time ...it rings like a bell
♩ ♪ ♫ ♬ D-O-N-G-G-G-G !! ♩ ♪ ♫ ♬

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

What a sweet tune love is, what a grasping sound passion sings. These are all beautiful when they grab the attention of your ear. Thats where it all starts

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Aye, so they are... Thank you for your words here, Sire. Appreciated.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

especially like the ending verse..."by the music of your rhythm"----and "the imprint...on my eyelids"

good stuff.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Jacob. Glad you like it (:

[emmajoy]

Words to bliss with and by.. such sweet dreams enclosed in dreamy enchantment, YumnaKay..

'an imprint ~ engraved upon the inside ~ of my eyelids..' those are the best dreams of all.. I know.

Beautiful..

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for appreciating and your beautiful words here, Emma. It doesn't hurt to dream sometimes, I think ... (:

[emmajoy]

If no dreams.. why bother to sleep.. .. .. .. ..