yet another day ...

Experimental.

the night falls ~ velvety gray,

yet another day comes to an end, 

this time glittering and content.

The sun above smiled a toothless grin, 

while in between the horizons 

something beckoned me close ... 

closer still ...

as the night falls velvety ~ gray.

Reviews

[Gul]

The night falls~velvety gray. yet another comes to an end....
These lines stroke me to live a better life everyday. Its so touching and emotional, that my days are just passing and this life goes on.

The circulation of day and night meets everyday and goes.

Fantastically written!!!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Aye, it does go on... Thank you for your lovely words here, Gul. I appreciate it 😊

[apennylate]

Velvet and gay, toothless grins of happy stars, and night falling on hapless mars... Closer still, eh? To that perfect style, and still you are laying down that almost sinister smoothness...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for your words here, Silente, that's dope ;) (:

[apennylate]

Almost as dope as the original content, but not quiiiiite... I wanted to review more of your stuff... But it is all hidden inside volumes of bookery...! What trickery...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hahahah well it's easier this way to see my stuff arranged in books if ever I decide to publish ;) but probably disadvantageous for reviewers lol, I'm sorry 😶😛

[apennylate]

Haha, I will forgive you this once, just means I have to do some extra digging... But what does it look like I am... An archaeologist...? :3

[Dr. YumnaKay]

you gotta dig deep to read good stuff lmaoo jk :P ;P

[apennylate]

Haha, you joke... But there is more than a smidge of truth to it...

[emmajoy]

Seems an adjustment of thoughts here. Two days, two greetings. Your feelings swing from glittering contentment to another mood- duller, dimmer - a lurking of shadows perhaps.

Fine write, my friend.. as ever always.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This was written in an attempt to mark my convocation day..while the day was a success, the night always brings a dull tone for me, almost foreboding... perhaps that needs to be changed.. Thank you so much for your words here and for appreciating this write, Em 😊💜

[emmajoy]

Good morning, Dr. YumnaKay.
No foreboding,surely.. more a long,strong exhale of tension, luv. You should be sailing a smooth sea now, looking forward to your next port of call. Enjoy.. please, please, please.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love the mystery here...something wicked this way comes?
or something wonderful this way comes...

we never know for sure....there is always that gray area....

really like that you give us visuals here, but you leave much to the imagination.
j.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Aye, so there is and it always leaves us wondering... Thank you for your words here, Jacob. Glad you appreciate 😊

[An owl on the moon]

Such a tender awakening in the joy of day's end and night's coming birth. Like the changing of seasons, the rhythms of day and night dance with such divine elegance. So happy you're back, dear Yumna! :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for your lovely words, Craig. And yes, tis good to be back :))

[An owl on the moon]

We shall all try and be extra kind to keep you here. :)

[Mr.Writer]

Damn...great job Yumna! It's so easy to read your writing, like wow!
Keep it up :))

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Shaan. Glad you like it 😊😊