I fade ...

Experimental

As the dawn rises ~ I fade 

in the distant afterglow clinging to the silhouette, 

tracing all the way back to your faint outline ...

 my words ~ flow; forming an invisible bridge 

to overcome the unseen barrier time created 

between you and me

I fade ~ as the dawn rises

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Your writing. Had the feel of the ancient writers. They made you feel every word. The poem had the feel of a private thought or moment. Gentle statement were loud and clear. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Dr. YumnaKay]

That's very humbling. Thank you so much, yet again, I truly appreciate your taking the time to read my pieces (:

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome my friend.

[zaisham9393]

I enjoyed reading this! For some reason, this reminds me of ''Vampire Diaries'' :D!
Thank you for sharing Yumna :)!I love your work!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

That's an interesting comparison! Thank you for appreciating, Zaisha. Glad you enjoyed 😊

[Scribbles]

I was back to being a little girl again because your chapter made me travel and to imagine your writing I explored my imagination like a kid

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for appreciating this write 😊

[Ken Simm.]

Melancholically beautiful.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Ken (:

[Sandra Soto]

Absolutely Love this, so beautiful.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for appreciating (:

[lightsong]

Gorgeous, powerful emotions sweep through Your words, unto us, splendid piece of art, so special and caress such deep levels of one's being, I believe my most favourite read from You, Thank You*

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for such a glowing review, Light. I appreciate your words here (:

[Shy Joe]

Shadows are fun to chase. When you catch one, can you tell me if their ticklish? When I grace them, they reflect. I think they lack the funny bone.

I enjoyed your poem. Thanks for sharing.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

That's a nice interpretation. Thank you, Joe. Glad you enjoyed (:

[Sinbulvinter]

I always love your poetry and the structures and formats you use. Each one reads differently, it's very refreshing.
This is a beautiful poem here, it's soothing.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for your lovely words, Nerissa. Glad you like this one (:
Hope you're well :)

[Sinbulvinter]

You're welcome. =)
I'm doing all right. I hope you're well as well.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

:p almost lol

[Mr.Writer]

A peaceful, strong poem that gives different types of vibes, and let's us further investigate the pictures created from it!
I really enjoyed the imagery of the poem, the poem itself, it was very well done Yumna!!!
Keep it up :))

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Shaan (:

[Tony Jordan]

There is no time, there is no distance between people who have this sacred connection. All shrinks. All stops. It's truly wonderful to experience at least once in Life. It changes our whole outlook.
You nailed it here Yumna :)))

[Dr. YumnaKay]

It does, sometimes drastically...
Thank you for your words here, Tony. Always appreciated 😊

[Tony Jordan]

troo dat ! :)

Hope you're enjoying Pakistan Independence Day Yumna !! :))

[Tony Jordan]

sorry - I hope you enjoyed (past tense) it...
:))

[Dr. YumnaKay]

:p if sleeping all day counts in enjoying then yes lol 😜

[Tony Jordan]

slothing is legit - yep...