Ephemeral

Experimental. Written off the top of my head...

Life smiles

when you do,

everything falls

back to place.

The sound of 

your distant breath;

ephemeral,

 yet...

lasting

~

an eternity...

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Just the word is a poem it seems. And then you paint the colors of light around it, and bring the moment to life. A breath. An eternity. All the world flowing in and out of focus. Written off the top of your head? What a brilliant space up there, dear poet. :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Such lovely words, thank you so much for appreciating, Craig. Glad you like it ((:

[barleygirl]

Your first two lines echo what two different friends told me in the last 24 hours! One shared a very old-time song with these lyrics. I guess everyone is needing a smile these days. I love the word "ephemeral" & the way you've used it!

https://youtu.be/yfsmmk93H3I

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I came by this word recently and wanted to write something regarding it so I'm glad you like how I used it :)
Thank you for appreciating, BG. I agree, a smile is what we need...and thanks too for the song link. I'll check it out (:

[barleygirl]

Einstein shared that song with me this morning, by the way (((HUGS)))

[Phill Oz O'fee]

A bit like loving whispers ....... ahhhhhhhhh! Deliciously stimulating write ... :-)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for your lovely words, Phill. I appreciate it (:

[Ken Simm.]

A very spiritual thought Yumna. Well written.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Ken. I appreciate your words here :)

[Kesha]

But sometimes you need teach life to smile when you yourself are smiling, to be happy on your own. Only then can someone else truly love you, a great piece though, I love it :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hm I agree with what you say. For me it's easier to be happy when I see my loved ones happy :) ;) read moreHm I agree with what you say. For me it's easier to be happy when I see my loved ones happy :) ;)
Thank you for liking and for sharing your thoughts, Kesha 😊💜

[Kesha]

You are very welcome:)