Absolutely best way to describe certain moods that come accompany depression and anxiety.
Moods usually pass, otherwise they become syndromes! I hope that's the case with you. You're a talented writer and if someone doesn't seem to appreciate you in all your tattered, flawed and wondrous glory - kill 'em in a poem! *laughing* I'm feelin' real maternal today, so I'll just say "Cheer up, honey. It'll work it self out...or not. Either way, you'll be fine."
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7 Years Ago
I wish I could really kill with my poems lol but sadly sometimes words seem too lame...
Thank.. read moreI wish I could really kill with my poems lol but sadly sometimes words seem too lame...
Thank you for feeling this write, Carol. I do appreciate your words always. 😊
A web of miserably promised night strolls... Or are they just lapses in drowning... One more time, and i am... Edgy. Dreamily penned...
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7 Years Ago
It was kinda depressingly penned lol but yeah it comes off as dreamy too...
Thank you for you.. read moreIt was kinda depressingly penned lol but yeah it comes off as dreamy too...
Thank you for your words here, Silente. I appreciate it :)
7 Years Ago
Mostly your words, heh, and you are most welcome...
i don't find this to be depressing. longing & dreamy perhaps. endearing. smooth, lovely writing.
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7 Years Ago
Yes, I think it could be interpreted that way too. I'm glad you didn't find it depressing. Thank you.. read moreYes, I think it could be interpreted that way too. I'm glad you didn't find it depressing. Thank you for appreciating, Pete 😊
There are eight more times here - not including the title and yet with that special someone - that person who we feel 'gets us' liek not other, even 8 times might not make us turn away from them forever.
Perhaps it's witchcraft or some other higher power at work but as Elvis might have sang "We're caught in a trap!"...thank u very much... uh-huh
well done here Yumna.
:)
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7 Years Ago
Lol I just noticed that :p
And I agree, an eternity of one more times would be insufficient f.. read moreLol I just noticed that :p
And I agree, an eternity of one more times would be insufficient for that...
Thank you, Tony. I always appreciate your words 😊
Poetic summary of when you are frightened to do something again because you had an unpleasant experience doing it the first time! Loved the flow of this write – a rhythmic pulse of energy pin pointing the flaws in an on/off relationship! :-)
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7 Years Ago
I love how you interpret and summarize my writes and others' pieces in general!
Thank you for.. read moreI love how you interpret and summarize my writes and others' pieces in general!
Thank you for appreciating, Phill. Glad you like it :)
Soft and gently flowing and tinged with a gentle sadness throughout. Usually repetition of the same line can be a drawback on a poem, but it works exceedingly well in this case.
A fine write. Melancholic and full of longing hope.
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7 Years Ago
Thank you, Doodley. I'm glad you think the repetition worked here 😊
I remember your poems back in the day. They were special but this, this is one of a kind. I love what the cafe has done for you. You have changed for the better. I also love that you are growing as a writer. The future looks bright for you, dear friend.
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7 Years Ago
I'm overwhelmed by your words, Gullia. Thank you so much 😘💜
Another dreamy, emotional and soft poem Yumna...
I really enjoyed reading this, and your emotions were clearly expressed and shown throughout this...
Well done, keep it up!