Just be ~ you

An introspection. Experimental. Nothing really special...

Let yourself loose ...

until - you cry out;

exhilarating ---

Breathe in ...

until - you feel your lungs;

collapsing ---

Love ...

until - your heart's capacity reaches its full;

annihilating ---

switch off your mind ... for a while ~

Sometimes it's better to forget everything and just be ~ you.

Author's Note

I hope it's not too vague :/

Reviews

[lightsong]

I so like it, when few simple words have such great impact and affect in such a wonderful way, the beauty of simplicity, and the power of simplicity too! Well done my friend.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Light. I appreciate your words here. Glad you like it :))

[lightsong]

Oh, not vague even a bit, not to me :) a kind of meditation Your poem is.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Ah, I'm glad it is. That is what I meant it to be for myself too...

[Poetic Beauty]

This is really good. Sometimes we do need to let go and just be ourselves.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Yes, it does feel nice to do that...
Thank you for appreciating 😊

[Mr.Writer]

This was a beautiful, engaging and emotional poem Yumna with realisticness!
The way you write, it feels like so much is coming out of it!
I really liked this, and it isn't too vague at all, but pretty smooth :)
Well done, keep it up! :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Ah, I'm glad you think so. I still feel it's sorta incomplete...
Thank you for your words here, Shaan 😊

[Mr.Writer]

No problem Yumna! :)

[Relic]

This resembles meditation to me. Something I've been wanting to do again for a long time. Just be yourself. That's advise I could have used when I was young.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I was feeling frustrated when I wrote this so yes, it is very much the meditation I used to write off my mind... glad it came off this way. Thank you, Relic.

[Surya]

Yeah, it's not vague...Indeed it's clear to me...and it worked well..sometimes it's truly better to be us...I enjoyed it...:)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Aye, so true. Thank you for your words, Surya. Glad you enjoyed 😊

[Carol Cashes]

Not vague! And wise advice in shallow and constantly changing world we live in. Well done.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I'd say it's more constantly changing people than the world; for the world is made of people and not vice versa ;)
Thank you for appreciating, Carol 😊

[Najam Us Saher]

All your experiments work out really well. ☺

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you. I'm glad you think so 😊

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. ☺

[Maria]

This was intense and powerful at the same time. Truly a moving ´piece even if its short. Message is very clear from the start till the very end. Great piece and great writing. Plus a great message we all need to keep dear.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you. I'm glad the message came off well. I appreciate your words here :)