Kingdom of Dreams

Experimental. Kind of dreamy ;p

A blanket of stars 

on an ebony sky,

 

freshly mown grass 

on a bright rainy day

 

a carpet of - half made promises.

 

I walk on, miles and miles 

towards the sound 

of your distant roar,

 

echoing; tempting me forward --

 

I reach out 

to the confines 

of where we built our

 

 kingdom ~ of dreams.

Reviews

[lightsong]

You are talented my friend, and Your talent shines here so brightly! You know what You are writing, and how to write it to turn it to not just beautiful poem, but to a one filled with emotions dripping from Your words, sometimes like drizzle, sometimes like rain...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you again for your lovely words, Light. I'm humbled at your appreciation. :)
And that's an interesting comparison of my words with drizzle and rain :) I appreciate that.

[LazerRays]

YES! Beautiful! Why dont i see more of these types of poems? This is brilliant! Perfect and charming! All the words are sown together with emotion, not structure! Perfect perfect perfect! 10/10!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're sweet! I'm humbled by your appreciation, dear friend! Sometimes, it feels like I do not own the words, rather the words own me (if that makes sense...)
Thank you so much for reading this one and for appreciating. x

[LazerRays]

Key word is emotion ;) not structure

[00000000000000000000000..]

Very magical muse under the starlight sky :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for appreciating :)

[0000000000000000000000000000]

You are very welcome I had to stop lol I didn't want ya to think id flipped and become a poem stocker lol:)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

:D hahaha no I wouldn't think that ;)

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Well ya be surprised what people think now days lol my friend :) but glad you wouldn't

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Ah I think I have a good idea about what people might think :P but whatever, idc :D

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Coldplay - A Sky Full of Stars goes great with the write of yours!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I love that song!! Interesting comparison 😳😍

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Some poets tend to see far far away:)

[Jes' Pi]

Kingdom of dreams..

A very sweet poem, my dear. I really missed your poems. Can't wait to talk to you soon!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much, Jess! I miss ya too. Will pm soon xx

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words and thoughts. Your good description made me feel and understand the words. Outstanding words and thoughts my friend.
Coyote

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Coyote. I appreciate your words here (:

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear friend.

[Stella Armour]

Beautiful and ethereal, I like the way you have presented your thoughts into a journey ending with your "Kingdom of dreams".
Well thought out and the lines flow beautifully into romantic images :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for your words here and for liking. I appreciate it :))

[emmajoy]

Yet another experiment that's taken off very beautifully -even tho' a touch sad.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I think most beautiful things have sad endings...
Thank you for your words here, Emma. Always appreciated :)

[Ty]

Leaving the reader afloat. Great piece.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for appreciating, Ty 😊

[DoormanDan]

This is a pleasant little bit of experimentation with imagery you've written. I've done something like this before, years ago. It's good for the brain, that's for sure. Keep up the good work. :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for appreciating. Glad you like it :))

[jacob erin-cilberto]

metaphorically beautiful....the kingdoms both literal and figurative...i like the use of "confines" because here the term has such a positive connotation...

j.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for appreciating, Jacob. 😊