~ I live ~

Experimental. Inspired.

I live

in the melancholy

of daydreams

I live

in the mere thought

of your being

I live

in the oceans

of shattered hopes

I live

in the extravagance

of your scent

I utter

a sigh of relief

and

~ I am home ~

Reviews

[Phill Oz O'fee]

The human brain is divided into two distinct cerebral hemisphere connected by the corpus callosum which give us right brain VS left brain functions. It has been suggested, one of the ‘Right’ brain characteristics are ‘words and language’. From the looks of this wonderfully formatted poetically penned composition – your creativity shines abundant! Excellent …………

[Dr. YumnaKay]

And I'm left handed actually 😊
Thank you for the lovely words of appreciation, Phill. Glad you like it 😊

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Ahhh .... there it is then - our left side controls are creativity! :-)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Probably I'm not that creative 😶

[Kesha]

Why is your poetry always so beauitful? I love the images you provoke here

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Kesha. Glad you think so 😊😊

[Kesha]

You're welcome :)

[Mr.Writer]

Such a clear, touching and dreamy-like poem Yumna...
It again expresses beauty in a mind of deep thoughts!
Well done, keep it up!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Shaan. I appreciate your words here :-)

[Mr.Writer]

No problem Yumna! :)

[Jibey]

I like the way it drips down the right side of the page... and the structure of the three lines, with the last verse split by the 'and'.

Clever stuff. Reflective and inspiring reflection.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Jibey. This was actually inspired by a friend. Glad you like it :-)

[emmajoy]

Ever expressive phrases, touching heart and mind. Your experimental writing is flying high, Yumna!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Emma. I'm glad you think so. Truly appreciate your words here, as always :))

[emmajoy]

Such a pleasure, sweet pea!

[Tony Jordan]

I live in the dentine of your molars
joking...

Great posey of poetry here Yumna.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hahah then it's a useless case ;) I'll have to extract the tooth 😛😂😂
Thank you, Tony. I appreciate your humour 😊 glad you like it 😇

[Surya]

Many touching lines in personal to me...I liked it..:)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you, Surya. Glad you did. :))